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H.O Chapter 1 sounds good except for one point: Did the H.O reader have to read the lines in color below, because they're not there. Otherwise, it's PL OK.

But he told me afterwards he had been dreaming that they really
_had_ come to eat H. O., and it couldn’t have been the pudding, when you come to think of it, because it was so very plain.



Chapter 7 is missing the line "Now you're a prisoner really and truly!"

In Chapter 8 "A DREADFUL WARNING. A wicked boy told me a very instructive thing about ginger. They had opened one of the large jars, and he happened to take out quite a lot, and he made it all right by dropping marbles in, till there was as much ginger as before. But he told me that on the Sunday, when it was coming near the part where there is only juice generally, I had no idea what his feelings were. I don’t see what he could have said when they asked him. I should be sorry to act like it." is marked as H.O's, but the line isn't in the recording. And there's an extra "Chapter 6 by H.O" at the end, but that doesn't signify for editing purposes.

Same issue with Chapter 12, the line "One dose gives immediate relief. It will cure your cold in one bottle" is also marked as H.O's but missing.

Everything else PL OK! Nice reading adrianstephens! :clap:
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adrianstephens wrote: February 5th, 2024, 7:40 am
llamaart wrote: February 3rd, 2024, 5:33 am
adrianstephens wrote: February 2nd, 2024, 4:13 am May I read H.O.?
Yes! Welcome!
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Quoting for visibility. Adrian, you'll find your PL notes one post above this.

I filled in the Magic Window during a scheduled absence, but if you have any questions about these lines, it would probably be best to quote llamaart directly.
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Bookworm360 wrote: March 15th, 2024, 7:20 am H.O Chapter 1 sounds good except for one point: Did the H.O reader have to read the lines in color below, because they're not there. Otherwise, it's PL OK.

But he told me afterwards he had been dreaming that they really
_had_ come to eat H. O., and it couldn’t have been the pudding, when you come to think of it, because it was so very plain.



Chapter 7 is missing the line "Now you're a prisoner really and truly!"

In Chapter 8 "A DREADFUL WARNING. A wicked boy told me a very instructive thing about ginger. They had opened one of the large jars, and he happened to take out quite a lot, and he made it all right by dropping marbles in, till there was as much ginger as before. But he told me that on the Sunday, when it was coming near the part where there is only juice generally, I had no idea what his feelings were. I don’t see what he could have said when they asked him. I should be sorry to act like it." is marked as H.O's, but the line isn't in the recording. And there's an extra "Chapter 6 by H.O" at the end, but that doesn't signify for editing purposes.

Same issue with Chapter 12, the line "One dose gives immediate relief. It will cure your cold in one bottle" is also marked as H.O's but missing.

Everything else PL OK! Nice reading adrianstephens! :clap:
Thank you for your kind words.

Here are the corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_01.mp3 (line inserted at 22s)
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_07.mp3 (line inserted at 9s)
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_08.mp3 (line inserted at 22s)
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_12.mp3 (line inserted at 15s)
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May I read the Butcher (misspelled in MW) and the Editor's Boy? They are in different chapters.

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Hello all. I send my sincerest apologies for not reapplying sooner! My notifications quit being sent via email. I would like to thank Bookworm360 for being our new DPL. I will try to keep up with BC work, but I am currently very busy. I hope you all under stand!

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ToddHW wrote: April 1st, 2024, 7:45 am May I read the Butcher (misspelled in MW) and the Editor's Boy? They are in different chapters.

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I have an exciting announcement! We are now FULL! Thank you so, so much everyone who helped fill this project up!
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Hello,

Here is Mr. Rosenbaum's Boy. - 16 seconds

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_mrrosenbaumsboy_09.mp3

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