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redrun wrote: February 7th, 2024, 8:24 am
And in case this saves some time later: I see there's also an MW section for H. O. in chapter 9, did you have that file ready for upload too?
Oops, I'd managed to skip over that. I'll try and get it done in the next day.
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adrianstephens wrote: February 7th, 2024, 8:41 am
redrun wrote: February 7th, 2024, 8:24 am
And in case this saves some time later: I see there's also an MW section for H. O. in chapter 9, did you have that file ready for upload too?
Oops, I'd managed to skip over that. I'll try and get it done in the next day.
Here you are: https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_09.mp3
(it was recorded in my shed to the accompaniment of rain and wind noises, hopefully not too evident)
My Librivox-related YouTube series starts here: Part 0: Introduction. https://youtu.be/pMHYycgA5VU
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Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
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adrianstephens wrote: February 8th, 2024, 12:17 am Here you are: https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_h_o_09.mp3
(it was recorded in my shed to the accompaniment of rain and wind noises, hopefully not too evident)
Got it, this is also queued for PL. :D
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Here is Chapter 9:

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetresureseekers_narrator_09.mp3

Time: ~19:24

I do have one question in this section. On page 12, the following is the following sentence: "Dicky said he wasn’t yet, but he had thought of being a mining engineer someday, and going to Klondike.". The highlighted parts were marked as being said by Dicky, and the non highlighted said by the narrator. As I read this, maybe that should all be said by the narrator. I recorded it as noted. It is found between 13:37 and 13:43 on my reading.

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Kalamareader wrote: February 9th, 2024, 9:39 pm Here is Chapter 9:
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As I read this, maybe that should all be said by the narrator. I recorded it as noted. It is found between 13:37 and 13:43 on my reading.
Thank you Wayne, and that's a good way to handle it. Better to have stuff to cut, than the reverse!
Salvationist wrote: February 13th, 2024, 5:37 pm Here's Noel for Chapter 3:
Got this one too, thanks!

MW is updated, and both are in queue for PL. :D
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https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_alice_10_.mp3 length 1:45

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_alice_11_.mp3 length 5:10

There were several highlighted areas in chapter 11 for Alice that were not speaking parts for her so i did not read them.
Page 5: Ego, although now that I look at this one closer it may be appropriate to read it; let me know what you think
Page 8: no idea how silly
Page 10: would he buy some? and to have some more to drink

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Thank you everyone! I should have time to get to these this weekend!

Best wishes, Allie.
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Hello,

May I claim section 9?

Thanks,
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Of course! Thank you so much!

Best wishes, Allie.
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Oswald Chapter 8 fixed, Chapters 9-16.

https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_08.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_09.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_10.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_11.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_12.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_13.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_14.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_15.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/redrun/storyofthetreasureseekers_oswald_16.mp3

In Chapter 11, in the line "Oswald said he would do the talking if the others liked, and he learned up what to say from the printed papers.", the red parts should probably be read by the narrator? I read them anyways, just in case, but I figured I'd let you know.

And about the laughter in Chapter 14 and 16, I did a couple different takes, but they sounds a bit fake to me. Hopefully they're satisfactory.
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Thank you so much! Those lines are read by the narrator. That was my bad, but don't worry about it. the editor can cute them out. Also I am sure the laughter is fine. I am not very good at laughing on demand either. lol

Best wishes, Allie
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