Wonderful job, Diego! You had me cracking up the whole time!
FULL [DR] The Golden Road (The Story Girl #2) by L.M. Montgomery -mtf
Dan, Chapter 6, is PL OK!
Wonderful job, Diego! You had me cracking up the whole time!
Wonderful job, Diego! You had me cracking up the whole time!
Last edited by benderca on May 23rd, 2023, 4:35 am, edited 1 time in total.
Dan, Chapter 14, is PL OK!
Thanks, Diego!
Thanks, Diego!
Last edited by benderca on May 23rd, 2023, 4:35 am, edited 1 time in total.
Notes for Cecily Chapter 15:
First, I'd like to say: Excellent acting, Allie!!! You are so convincing as the wronged damsel in distress!
I have a few notes:
0:00
Missing Lines (p. 1):
Cecily declared she
hated to go to sleep
for fear she
might miss something.
Missing Line (p. 1):
could not see the funny side of it at all
Missing Lines (p. 1):
"But I'm always afraid he will,"
said Cecily,
"and it would be such a DISGRACE to have two boys fighting over me in school."
Missing Lines (p. 1):
"I never did!"
cried outraged Cecily.
"You know very well, Felicity King, that I hated Cyrus Brisk ever since the very first time I saw his big, fat, red face. So there!"
0:36
Missing word: "not" -- It should be "wasn't" (I hear "was")
and mother would be cross, for she'd never believe it wasn't my fault.
0:44
Missing word: "not" -- It should be "wouldn't" (I hear "would")
It wouldn't be so bad if he'd only taken a little, but he cut a great big chunk right off the end of one of the braids.
1:08
Extra word: "don't" :
It should be "I--I think so, sir," (I hear "I--I don't think so, sir,")
Thanks!
TJ
First, I'd like to say: Excellent acting, Allie!!! You are so convincing as the wronged damsel in distress!
I have a few notes:
0:00
Missing Lines (p. 1):
Cecily declared she
hated to go to sleep
for fear she
might miss something.
Missing Line (p. 1):
could not see the funny side of it at all
Missing Lines (p. 1):
"But I'm always afraid he will,"
said Cecily,
"and it would be such a DISGRACE to have two boys fighting over me in school."
Missing Lines (p. 1):
"I never did!"
cried outraged Cecily.
"You know very well, Felicity King, that I hated Cyrus Brisk ever since the very first time I saw his big, fat, red face. So there!"
0:36
Missing word: "not" -- It should be "wasn't" (I hear "was")
and mother would be cross, for she'd never believe it wasn't my fault.
0:44
Missing word: "not" -- It should be "wouldn't" (I hear "would")
It wouldn't be so bad if he'd only taken a little, but he cut a great big chunk right off the end of one of the braids.
1:08
Extra word: "don't" :
It should be "I--I think so, sir," (I hear "I--I don't think so, sir,")
Thanks!
TJ
Cecily Chapter 11:
Great acting as always, Allie! I just have 2 small notes about the last line:
1:40
Missing words: "to do"
Wrong word: "for" (I hear "after")
"Of course I don't think the wishbone had really anything to do with our getting Paddy back, but I'm glad I tried it, for all that,"
If you want, you can just re-record that last line and submit it in a separate file called:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_11_lastline.mp3
Thanks!
TJ
Great acting as always, Allie! I just have 2 small notes about the last line:
1:40
Missing words: "to do"
Wrong word: "for" (I hear "after")
"Of course I don't think the wishbone had really anything to do with our getting Paddy back, but I'm glad I tried it, for all that,"
If you want, you can just re-record that last line and submit it in a separate file called:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_11_lastline.mp3
Thanks!
TJ
Cecily Chapter 13 is PL OK!
Thanks, Allie!
Thanks, Allie!
Cecily Chapter 14 Notes:
1:11
Tense: I it should be "she likely heard" (I hear "she'll likely hear")
"Oh, well, she likely heard that from some one. Grown up folks talk things over long before they tell them to children,"
4:55
"Perkins" sounds like "Peter-kin" and "dictation" is unclear.
Well, I just took his letter and wrote in all the words, spelled right, above the wrong
ones, in red ink, just as Mr. Perkins makes us do with our dictation exercises, and sent it back to him.
It would be fine if you want to record those two lines on a separate file called:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_14_extralines.mp3
Thanks!
1:11
Tense: I it should be "she likely heard" (I hear "she'll likely hear")
"Oh, well, she likely heard that from some one. Grown up folks talk things over long before they tell them to children,"
4:55
"Perkins" sounds like "Peter-kin" and "dictation" is unclear.
Well, I just took his letter and wrote in all the words, spelled right, above the wrong
ones, in red ink, just as Mr. Perkins makes us do with our dictation exercises, and sent it back to him.
It would be fine if you want to record those two lines on a separate file called:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_14_extralines.mp3
Thanks!
Dan Chapter 13 is PL OK!
Thanks, Diego!
Thanks, Diego!
Cecily Chapters 16, 18, & 20 are PL OK!
Thanks, Allie!
Thanks, Allie!
Last edited by benderca on June 6th, 2023, 2:17 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Dan Chapters 8, 11, 12, 16, 17, 18, 20, & 21 are PL OK!
Thanks, Diego!
Thanks, Diego!
DiegoT wrote:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_08.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_11.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_12.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_16.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_17.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_18.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_21.mp3
Enjoy!
-Diego T
Last edited by benderca on June 6th, 2023, 2:41 pm, edited 8 times in total.
For Dan Chapter 9, you are missing some lines at the end:
p. 5:
DAN KING.
p. 6:
(DAN: "If Felix had said she was sunburned you'd have all jumped on him."
DAN: "What does it mean then?"
p. 7:
(DAN: "That's Valeria's way of putting it, but Uncle Roger says she don't show her feed much."
Thanks!
p. 5:
DAN KING.
p. 6:
(DAN: "If Felix had said she was sunburned you'd have all jumped on him."
DAN: "What does it mean then?"
p. 7:
(DAN: "That's Valeria's way of putting it, but Uncle Roger says she don't show her feed much."
Thanks!
Cecily Chapter 17 Notes:
0:01 MISSING WORDS: to ask her
"I'll get Aunt Olivia to ask her to let you have your supper with us,"
Thanks, Allie!
0:01 MISSING WORDS: to ask her
"I'll get Aunt Olivia to ask her to let you have your supper with us,"
Thanks, Allie!
Dan Chapters 22, 23, 24, 26, 27, 29, 30, 31, & 32 are PL OK!
Thanks, Diego! Wonderful job!!!
Thanks, Diego! Wonderful job!!!
DiegoT wrote:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_23.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_24.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_26.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_27.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_29.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_30.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_31.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_32.mp3
Enjoy!
-Diego T
One tiny note for Cecily Chapter 31:
1:31
The line reads: "...Shouldn't it have gone in the General Information department?"
(I hear "It shouldn't have gone in the General Information department." - which means the exact opposite. )
You can submit a new file with just this one line if you like and label it:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_31_lastline.mp3
Cecily Chapters 22, 23, 30, & 32 are PL OK!
Thanks, Allie!
1:31
The line reads: "...Shouldn't it have gone in the General Information department?"
(I hear "It shouldn't have gone in the General Information department." - which means the exact opposite. )
You can submit a new file with just this one line if you like and label it:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_31_lastline.mp3
Cecily Chapters 22, 23, 30, & 32 are PL OK!
Thanks, Allie!
Here are the corrections for chapters 4 and 6 of Felicity:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_04.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_06.mp3
And the remaining files for her part (at least I think I got them all, haha):
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_14.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_15.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_16.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_17.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_18.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_21.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_23.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_24.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_26.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_27.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_29.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_30.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_31.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_32.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_33.mp3
In chapter 24 there were 2 lines marked for Felicity that I believe belonged to Cecily and the Story girl (page 1 "Is it about Miss Reade?" and page 4 "She knows all about the mystery and thinks its perfectly lovely and so do I.")
Also, I did my best with the song in Chapter 32 as it was a little low for my voice range. I won't be offended at all if it isn't usable
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_04.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_06.mp3
And the remaining files for her part (at least I think I got them all, haha):
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_14.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_15.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_16.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_17.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_18.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_21.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_23.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_24.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_26.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_27.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_29.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_30.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_31.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_32.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_33.mp3
In chapter 24 there were 2 lines marked for Felicity that I believe belonged to Cecily and the Story girl (page 1 "Is it about Miss Reade?" and page 4 "She knows all about the mystery and thinks its perfectly lovely and so do I.")
Also, I did my best with the song in Chapter 32 as it was a little low for my voice range. I won't be offended at all if it isn't usable
-Jenn B.
My Recordings
My Recordings
I love your Felicity, Jenn! She's got such spunk!
Chapters 4, 6, 14, 15, 16, 17 & 18 are PL OK!
Chapters 4, 6, 14, 15, 16, 17 & 18 are PL OK!
jennlea wrote: ↑June 11th, 2023, 12:02 pm Here are the corrections for chapters 4 and 6 of Felicity:
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_04.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_06.mp3
And the remaining files for her part (at least I think I got them all, haha):
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_14.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_15.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_16.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_17.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felicity_18.mp3