Complete [SOLO] The Thing in the Woods by Margery Williams Bianco -ag

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 13th, 2021, 9:03 am

Chapter 4 ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_04_bianco_128kb.mp3

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 13th, 2021, 12:41 pm

Benjamin,
Chapter 4 is PL Okay.

Thank you,
Lora

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 13th, 2021, 2:37 pm

Chapter 5!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_05_bianco_128kb.mp3

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 13th, 2021, 3:47 pm

And Chapter 6!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_06_bianco_128kb.mp3

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 15th, 2021, 1:26 pm

Chapter 7!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_07_bianco_128kb.mp3

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 15th, 2021, 6:49 pm

Benjamin,
I've marked chapters 5-7 as PL okay, however, you may want to check chapter 5 at 8:50. After "What's your theory?" I asked, there is a line missing. It is: "He revolved the toothpick meditatively." It's not a big deal but you may want to add it in.

Thanks,
Lora

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 16th, 2021, 7:45 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑December 15th, 2021, 6:49 pm Benjamin,
I've marked chapters 5-7 as PL okay, however, you may want to check chapter 5 at 8:50. After "What's your theory?" I asked, there is a line missing. It is: "He revolved the toothpick meditatively." It's not a big deal but you may want to add it in.

Thanks,
Lora

Thanks for the catch! Fixed it:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_05_bianco_128kb.mp3

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 16th, 2021, 9:49 am

Btw, I also updated the summary to something a little more coherent and less spoiler-y. Let me know how it looks.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 16th, 2021, 2:06 pm

Thanks, Benjamin; the fix is fine. I also think the summary turned out well.

L.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 17th, 2021, 2:11 pm

Chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_08_bianco_128kb.mp3

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 19th, 2021, 11:17 am

Hi Benjamin,
I've marked Chapter 8 PL Okay, but at 19:43 you will want to change "arms" to "ears" in the line "Suddenly he stood still and his ears laid back..."

Thanks,
Lora

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 20th, 2021, 8:16 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑December 19th, 2021, 11:17 am Hi Benjamin,
I've marked Chapter 8 PL Okay, but at 19:43 you will want to change "arms" to "ears" in the line "Suddenly he stood still and his ears laid back..."

Thanks,
Lora

Oops, fixed: https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_08_bianco_128kb.mp3

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 20th, 2021, 10:12 am

Thanks!

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » December 20th, 2021, 10:59 am

Chapter 9!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/thinginthewoods_09_bianco_128kb.mp3

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 20th, 2021, 11:39 am

Chapter 9 is PL Okay.

L.