[Solo]The Knave of Diamonds by Ethel M. Dell - kit

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » August 14th, 2022, 4:56 am

Section 19 is PL OK!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » September 10th, 2022, 7:25 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I wanted to give you an update: I've been working hard on Section 20 these past few weeks, but it probably will take me another week or two to finish editing it. It is a very lengthy chapter but also an exciting one, so stay tuned!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » October 1st, 2022, 2:55 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 20.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » October 1st, 2022, 3:54 pm

Section 20 sounds great, as always, and you weren't kidding when you said it was exciting!

I have a few notes, but they're about minor word changes, so you might decide to leave them as is:

- At 2:40, "the shining garment of her youth," you say "the shining garment of youth"
- At 5:07, "what that yell might portend," you say "what that yell must portend"
- At 9:12, "satiated for the moment with revenge," you say "satiated for the moment with vengeance"
- At 10:57, "and tried to stanch the blood," you say "and tried to staunch the blood"

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » October 22nd, 2022, 4:52 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have reposted Section 20 with these corrections and am working on Section 21. I will let you know when I have posted Section 21.

Scarbo wrote: ↑October 1st, 2022, 3:54 pm Section 20 sounds great, as always, and you weren't kidding when you said it was exciting! I have a few notes, but they're about minor word changes, so you might decide to leave them as is:

- At 2:40, "the shining garment of her youth," you say "the shining garment of youth"
- At 5:07, "what that yell might portend," you say "what that yell must portend"
- At 9:12, "satiated for the moment with revenge," you say "satiated for the moment with vengeance"
- At 10:57, "and tried to stanch the blood," you say "and tried to staunch the blood"

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » October 22nd, 2022, 5:31 pm

Section 20 is PL OK!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » November 5th, 2022, 4:46 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 21.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » November 5th, 2022, 5:50 pm

Section 21 is nicely done, as always! The only note I have is that at 2:54, "he said deferentially," I hear "he said differentially."

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » November 19th, 2022, 2:34 pm

I have made the correction to Section 21 and re-posted it.

Scarbo wrote: ↑November 5th, 2022, 5:50 pm Section 21 is nicely done, as always! The only note I have is that at 2:54, "he said deferentially," I hear "he said differentially."

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » November 19th, 2022, 3:31 pm

Section 21 is PL OK!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » December 18th, 2022, 6:49 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I wanted to give you an update: I'm almost done editing Section 22 but it will probably be a few more days before I post it.

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » December 21st, 2022, 7:42 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 22.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » December 22nd, 2022, 8:42 am

Section 22 is PL OK!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » January 21st, 2023, 12:52 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I'm currently editing Section 23 but noticed a few parts where I mismatched a word or two, so I'll need to re-record those parts.
I'll most likely have Section 23 done in the next few days.

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » January 29th, 2023, 2:42 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 23.