[Solo]The Knave of Diamonds by Ethel M. Dell - kit

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » April 3rd, 2022, 5:28 pm

Section 14 is PL OK!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » April 26th, 2022, 8:46 pm

I have posted Section 15.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » April 27th, 2022, 5:58 pm

SirenaRose wrote: ↑April 26th, 2022, 8:46 pm I have posted Section 15.

Section 15 sounds great, as always! I have just two notes that are about such minor changes that you might decide to leave them as is:

- At 0:51, "and she evaded him so adroitly," I hear "and she evaded him so adrotly."
- At 13:54, "he repeatedly coolly," you say "he replied coolly."

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » May 7th, 2022, 10:57 am

I have reposted Section 15 with these corrections.

Scarbo wrote: ↑April 27th, 2022, 5:58 pm
SirenaRose wrote: ↑April 26th, 2022, 8:46 pm I have posted Section 15.
Section 15 sounds great, as always! I have just two notes that are about such minor changes that you might decide to leave them as is:

- At 0:51, "and she evaded him so adroitly," I hear "and she evaded him so adrotly."
- At 13:54, "he repeatedly coolly," you say "he replied coolly."

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » May 7th, 2022, 2:19 pm

Section 15 is PL OK!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » May 28th, 2022, 3:29 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 16.
Also, I wanted to let you know that I changed my target completion date from being July 1st, 2022 to being December 21st, 2022.
I am very excited to record the next few chapters! We learn more about Anne's backstory and see her and Nap's relationship develop.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » May 29th, 2022, 2:01 pm

Section 16 is PL OK!

I'm looking forward to the next few chapters! I've been enjoying this so far, but no surprise there since it's a Dell novel.

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » June 4th, 2022, 5:40 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 17.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » June 4th, 2022, 6:28 pm

Section 17 is PL OK!

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » July 3rd, 2022, 4:06 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I wanted to give you an update: I've been working hard on Section 18 and will be posting it tomorrow.

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » July 4th, 2022, 11:35 am

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 18.
This is definitely one of my favorite chapters because we learn about the backstory of Anne's marriage to Sir Giles and get to see more of Anne and Nap's friendship.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » July 4th, 2022, 4:47 pm

Section 18 is PL OK!

I have to say I had this reaction when Anne told Nap why she married Sir Giles!:

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » July 31st, 2022, 10:48 am

Hi Scarbo,
I have posted Section 19.

Scarbo · Post by **Scarbo** » July 31st, 2022, 3:50 pm

Section 19 sounds great, as always! I have just two notes:

- At 9:13, "had seemed to warrant," you pronounce "warrant" with a short A sound, which I wanted to mention in case you preferred to change it to a long A.
- At 9:24, "to have left without bidding him farewell," you say "to have left without biding him farewell."

SirenaRose · Post by **SirenaRose** » August 13th, 2022, 6:39 pm

Hi Scarbo,
I have made these two changes to Section 19 and have re-posted it.

Scarbo wrote: ↑July 31st, 2022, 3:50 pm Section 19 sounds great, as always! I have just two notes:

- At 9:13, "had seemed to warrant," you pronounce "warrant" with a short A sound, which I wanted to mention in case you preferred to change it to a long A.
- At 9:24, "to have left without bidding him farewell," you say "to have left without biding him farewell."