COMPLETE [Play] A Family Man by John Galsworthy-mas
PL notes for Act I.
All the cuts are very smooth, and volume is consistent throughout. I haven't PLed a play before, so not sure what level of detail you wanted. I always follow along with the text, and I found a few missing items:
00:17 - I hear "Builder, read by". Was that intentional, or did "John Builder" get cut off accidentally?
00:57 - same comment for "Chantrey" (which makes me think this was intentional, so these 2 can likely be ignored)
13:16 missing line from stage direction:
" BUILDER. Oh! So that's your view of us! [His eyes rest on her, attracted but resentful].
CAMILLE. Pardon, Monsieur, my tongue run away with me. "
14:24 - missing line from stage direction:
"encounter between their eyes.]
CAMILLE goes out.
BUILDER. [Turning to his chair]
35:11 - missing line from stage direction:
ATHENE enters. She is flushed and graceful. Twenty-two, with a short upper lip, a straight nose, dark hair, and glowing eyes. She wears bright colours, and has a slow, musical voice, with a slight lisp.
44:40 - missing line from stage direction:
" MRS BUILDER steps quickly out and the door is closed. Guy makes an angry movement towards it. "
All the cuts are very smooth, and volume is consistent throughout. I haven't PLed a play before, so not sure what level of detail you wanted. I always follow along with the text, and I found a few missing items:
00:17 - I hear "Builder, read by". Was that intentional, or did "John Builder" get cut off accidentally?
00:57 - same comment for "Chantrey" (which makes me think this was intentional, so these 2 can likely be ignored)
13:16 missing line from stage direction:
" BUILDER. Oh! So that's your view of us! [His eyes rest on her, attracted but resentful].
CAMILLE. Pardon, Monsieur, my tongue run away with me. "
14:24 - missing line from stage direction:
"encounter between their eyes.]
CAMILLE goes out.
BUILDER. [Turning to his chair]
35:11 - missing line from stage direction:
ATHENE enters. She is flushed and graceful. Twenty-two, with a short upper lip, a straight nose, dark hair, and glowing eyes. She wears bright colours, and has a slow, musical voice, with a slight lisp.
44:40 - missing line from stage direction:
" MRS BUILDER steps quickly out and the door is closed. Guy makes an angry movement towards it. "
Krista
Thank you Krista I have contacted the readers re missing lines. I am also just waiting on some missing lines for the other two acts before uploading them.kristakz wrote: ↑March 13th, 2022, 10:28 am PL notes for Act I.
All the cuts are very smooth, and volume is consistent throughout. I haven't PLed a play before, so not sure what level of detail you wanted. I always follow along with the text, and I found a few missing items:
00:17 - I hear "Builder, read by". Was that intentional, or did "John Builder" get cut off accidentally?
00:57 - same comment for "Chantrey" (which makes me think this was intentional, so these 2 can likely be ignored)Happy to leave these as they are thanks
13:16 missing line from stage direction:
" BUILDER. Oh! So that's your view of us! [His eyes rest on her, attracted but resentful].
CAMILLE. Pardon, Monsieur, my tongue run away with me. "
14:24 - missing line from stage direction:
"encounter between their eyes.]
CAMILLE goes out.
BUILDER. [Turning to his chair]
35:11 - missing line from stage direction:
ATHENE enters. She is flushed and graceful. Twenty-two, with a short upper lip, a straight nose, dark hair, and glowing eyes. She wears bright colours, and has a slow, musical voice, with a slight lisp.
44:40 - missing line from stage direction:
" MRS BUILDER steps quickly out and the door is closed. Guy makes an angry movement towards it. "
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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Michele
I've added the new narrator corrections to the same file
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_narrator_0missinglines.mp3
That now includes all the corrections for acts 1 to 3.
I've added the new narrator corrections to the same file
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_narrator_0missinglines.mp3
That now includes all the corrections for acts 1 to 3.
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Thank you Michael! Michele will have limited access to the forums for a while (maybe a couple of weeks). So you'll hear from her when she gets back and is able to get caught up.MichaelMaggs wrote: ↑March 14th, 2022, 8:35 am Michele
I've added the new narrator corrections to the same file
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_narrator_0missinglines.mp3
That now includes all the corrections for acts 1 to 3.
MaryAnn
thank you very much appreciated I will PL them over the next couple of daysMichaelMaggs wrote: ↑March 14th, 2022, 8:35 am Michele
I've added the new narrator corrections to the same file
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_narrator_0missinglines.mp3
That now includes all the corrections for acts 1 to 3.
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
I have edited Act 1 and reuploaded ready for a spot PL
Acts 2 and 3 are ready for their final PL thanks
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_01_galsworthy_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_02_galsworthy_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_03_galsworthy_128kb.mp3
Acts 2 and 3 are ready for their final PL thanks
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_01_galsworthy_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_02_galsworthy_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_03_galsworthy_128kb.mp3
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Hi thank you so much for the PL ing I am happy to leave that line out as it doesn't affect the plot. Thank you to everyone who has participated and helped get this project together. This is now ready to go to the catalogue. Well done everyone.
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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And Well Done to you Michele
Another one in the bag
Another one in the bag
Alan
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
Thank you Alan much appreciated
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Here is the cast list excited to get another project in the catalogue.
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12075">MichaelMaggs</a><br>Mr Builder: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a><br>Maud: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a><br>Guy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15042">John Payton</a><br>Topping: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>Harris: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14361">Andrew Kennedy</a><br>Camille: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13807">JennPratt</a><br>Mrs Builder: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzhiller</a><br>Annie: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7026">Michele Eaton</a><br>Mayor: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>Athene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15944">Diana Helen Kennedy</a><br>Ralph: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15552">Anthony Joseph</a><br>Sergeant: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10542">David Purdy</a><br>Moon: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">James R. Hedrick</a><br>Chantrey: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16450">Mark Kilkelly</a><br>Boy's Voice: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15779">ksb013</a><br>Journalist: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a><br>
Stage Directions: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12075">MichaelMaggs</a><br>Mr Builder: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13577">Adrian Stephens</a><br>Maud: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a><br>Guy: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15042">John Payton</a><br>Topping: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>Harris: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14361">Andrew Kennedy</a><br>Camille: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13807">JennPratt</a><br>Mrs Builder: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15373">WendyKatzhiller</a><br>Annie: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7026">Michele Eaton</a><br>Mayor: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/6754">ToddHW</a><br>Athene: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15944">Diana Helen Kennedy</a><br>Ralph: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15552">Anthony Joseph</a><br>Sergeant: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10542">David Purdy</a><br>Moon: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16205">James R. Hedrick</a><br>Chantrey: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/16450">Mark Kilkelly</a><br>Boy's Voice: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15779">ksb013</a><br>Journalist: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10179">Sonia</a><br>
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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This project is now complete. All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/a-family-man-by-john-galsworthy/