COMPLETE [Play] A Family Man by John Galsworthy-mas

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » March 13th, 2022, 10:28 am

PL notes for Act I.
All the cuts are very smooth, and volume is consistent throughout. I haven't PLed a play before, so not sure what level of detail you wanted. I always follow along with the text, and I found a few missing items:

00:17 - I hear "Builder, read by". Was that intentional, or did "John Builder" get cut off accidentally?
00:57 - same comment for "Chantrey" (which makes me think this was intentional, so these 2 can likely be ignored)

13:16 missing line from stage direction:
" BUILDER. Oh! So that's your view of us! [His eyes rest on her, attracted but resentful].
CAMILLE. Pardon, Monsieur, my tongue run away with me. "

14:24 - missing line from stage direction:
"encounter between their eyes.]
CAMILLE goes out.
BUILDER. [Turning to his chair]

35:11 - missing line from stage direction:
ATHENE enters. She is flushed and graceful. Twenty-two, with a short upper lip, a straight nose, dark hair, and glowing eyes. She wears bright colours, and has a slow, musical voice, with a slight lisp.

44:40 - missing line from stage direction:
" MRS BUILDER steps quickly out and the door is closed. Guy makes an angry movement towards it. "

wib66 · Post by **wib66** » March 13th, 2022, 11:01 am

kristakz wrote: ↑March 13th, 2022, 10:28 am PL notes for Act I.
All the cuts are very smooth, and volume is consistent throughout. I haven't PLed a play before, so not sure what level of detail you wanted. I always follow along with the text, and I found a few missing items:

00:17 - I hear "Builder, read by". Was that intentional, or did "John Builder" get cut off accidentally?
00:57 - same comment for "Chantrey" (which makes me think this was intentional, so these 2 can likely be ignored)Happy to leave these as they are thanks

13:16 missing line from stage direction:
" BUILDER. Oh! So that's your view of us! [His eyes rest on her, attracted but resentful].
CAMILLE. Pardon, Monsieur, my tongue run away with me. "

14:24 - missing line from stage direction:
"encounter between their eyes.]
CAMILLE goes out.
BUILDER. [Turning to his chair]

35:11 - missing line from stage direction:
ATHENE enters. She is flushed and graceful. Twenty-two, with a short upper lip, a straight nose, dark hair, and glowing eyes. She wears bright colours, and has a slow, musical voice, with a slight lisp.

44:40 - missing line from stage direction:
" MRS BUILDER steps quickly out and the door is closed. Guy makes an angry movement towards it. "

Thank you Krista I have contacted the readers re missing lines. I am also just waiting on some missing lines for the other two acts before uploading them.

MichaelMaggs · Post by **MichaelMaggs** » March 14th, 2022, 8:35 am

Michele

I've added the new narrator corrections to the same file

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_narrator_0missinglines.mp3

That now includes all the corrections for acts 1 to 3.

Post by **MaryAnnSpiegel** » March 14th, 2022, 8:09 pm

MichaelMaggs wrote: ↑March 14th, 2022, 8:35 am Michele

I've added the new narrator corrections to the same file

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_narrator_0missinglines.mp3

That now includes all the corrections for acts 1 to 3.

Thank you Michael! Michele will have limited access to the forums for a while (maybe a couple of weeks). So you'll hear from her when she gets back and is able to get caught up.

MaryAnn

wib66 · Post by **wib66** » March 24th, 2022, 7:45 am

MichaelMaggs wrote: ↑March 14th, 2022, 8:35 am Michele

I've added the new narrator corrections to the same file

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_narrator_0missinglines.mp3

That now includes all the corrections for acts 1 to 3.

thank you very much appreciated I will PL them over the next couple of days

wib66 · Post by **wib66** » April 3rd, 2022, 8:29 am

I have edited Act 1 and reuploaded ready for a spot PL

Acts 2 and 3 are ready for their final PL thanks

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_01_galsworthy_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_02_galsworthy_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/familyman_03_galsworthy_128kb.mp3

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » April 3rd, 2022, 10:29 am

Act 1 is PL OK now.

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » April 3rd, 2022, 11:20 am

Act 2 is PL OK

kristakz · Post by **kristakz** » April 4th, 2022, 3:07 pm

Act 3 PL notes:

Missing narration at 17:43 - "Ralph Builder stands up."

Everything else is PL OK (and this missing line does not seem critical).

wib66 · Post by **wib66** » April 5th, 2022, 3:03 am

kristakz wrote: ↑April 4th, 2022, 3:07 pm Act 3 PL notes:

Missing narration at 17:43 - "Ralph Builder stands up."

Everything else is PL OK (and this missing line does not seem critical).

Hi thank you so much for the PL ing I am happy to leave that line out as it doesn't affect the plot. Thank you to everyone who has participated and helped get this project together. This is now ready to go to the catalogue. Well done everyone.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 5th, 2022, 3:08 am

And Well Done to you Michele

Another one in the bag

wib66 · Post by **wib66** » April 5th, 2022, 2:30 pm

alanmapstone wrote: ↑April 5th, 2022, 3:08 am And Well Done to you Michele

Another one in the bag

Thank you Alan much appreciated

wib66 · Post by **wib66** » April 5th, 2022, 2:49 pm

Post by **MaryAnnSpiegel** » April 6th, 2022, 3:38 pm

This project is now complete. All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/a-family-man-by-john-galsworthy/