Acts 3 and 4 are straight PL ok.
For Act 5, concerning your note:
yes but there was no need to, because luckily at exactly 24:00, the Princess once whispers "Butterfly" and you can very easily copy it and paste it at 35:55, re-including the stage directions "to Sir George, softly" They are so far apart that nobody will notice it's the exact same tone of voice and it doesn't sound strange cut off from the rest of the sentence.
> at 37:32: "the end" – usually we include "End of Act 5" at this point. It's missing now, was that done on purpose ?
Other than that, all is brilliantly assembled. Great job again, Todd !
Sonia