benderca wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 4:50 pm
Act 1 Notes:
Uggg. That was a lot of errors. Sorry about that. Here's the correction (with new timings):
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilservice_steveaudaine_1_128kb.mp3
0:55
MISSING LINE at about 0:54 (p.9):
STEVE (takes parcel from pocket).
It isn't much. (Hands it to her.)
I hope you'll wear it at your birthday party tonight.
3:29
MISSING LINE at about 3:16 (p. 13):
STEVE. I don't know what you're talking about.
5:07
EXTRA LINE at 4:51-4:55 (p. 14) -- you have recorded part of a line that belongs to Peavy:
It's just my little joking way. Can't you take a joke? (So please cut that section out).
5:10
MISSING LINE at 4:58 (p. 14):
STEVE. Well, don't joke about me. I'm not in the mood for jokes.
5:35
REPEATED LINE at 5:21 (p. 15):
STEVE. He's just driving in. (I think you meant to cut the first one out 5:21-5:24)
6:56 line replaced
EXTRA WORDS at 6:44 (p. 20):
STEVE. I'll make a payment on the first of the month.
Miss G. (cut out "Miss G." - that belongs to the next line).
10:11
MISSING LINE at 9:58 (p. 27):
STEVE. (startled). What is it? What do you want?
benderca wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 5:40 pm
Steve, Act 3, Notes:
b]REPEATED LINE [/b]at 2:15:
I am going to the Inspector.
MISSING LINE at 2:34 (p. 65):
ALL. Mrs. Jeffs!
Corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilservice_steveaudaine_3_128kb.mp3
Thank you, TJ, for not falling on the floor laughing - or at least not doing it in public :)