PL OKirondog70 wrote: ↑June 8th, 2019, 6:35 pmAureoles are properly cooked now:
Duration:7:53 (same as before)
Sorry for the extra time
PL OKHorner94 wrote: ↑June 9th, 2019, 11:34 amHello,
I have reduced the volume of Section 200.
Please review audio recording by clicking the following link:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_200_cawein_128kb.mp3 Time: 03:03
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Most are PL OKelsieselwyn wrote: ↑June 9th, 2019, 11:47 amHere are all my sections:
Section 178: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_178_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:13)
Section 179: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_179_cawein_128kb.mp3 (4:53)
Section 180: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_180_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:33)
Section 181: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_181_cawein_128kb.mp3 (1:56)
Section 182: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_182_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:28)
Section 183: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_183_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:07)
Section 185: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_185_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:44)
Section 186: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_186_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:14)
Section 187: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_187_cawein_128kb.mp3 (2:21)
Section 188: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_188_cawein_128kb.mp3 (3:02)
Section 189: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poemscawein3_189_cawein_128kb.mp3 (1:49)
1:13: 'Or, with a smile, through watery depths' should be 'Or, with a smile, through watery deeps' (so it rhymes with 'sleeps' and 'leaps' in the nest few lines)
0:56: 'celandine' in 'Now golden celandine' should be prounounced 'SEL-uhn-dahyn' (so that it rhymes with 'vine' and 'shine')
1:46: The ending silence is too short. You should be aiming for 5 seconds, and you've got about 3.6 seconds.