FULL[PLAY]Every Man Out of His Humour by Jonson - thw

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Post by ej400 » April 5th, 2019, 10:42 am

ToddHW wrote:
April 5th, 2019, 10:26 am
Drafts of 4 and 5 are done, but not ready for PL yet.

Will I have to put a warning in the summary about the dog-poisoning!!???!!??

Thanks, Todd
Just say "no animals were harmed in the process of recording". :mrgreen: <mrgreen>
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Post by ToddHW » April 5th, 2019, 12:33 pm

ej400 wrote:
April 5th, 2019, 8:42 am
Nothing to be concerned about... :twisted: <evil>

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_servant_4_128kb.mp3 -0:15
PL OK. Very nice. Thank you for the fast turnaround.

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Post by ToddHW » April 5th, 2019, 6:09 pm

Act 4 ready for final PL.

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Post by Kitty » April 6th, 2019, 6:04 am

ToddHW wrote:
April 5th, 2019, 6:09 pm
Act 4 ready for final PL.
ah a wonderfully entertaining hour of listening I have just spent. :9: I wasn't at all sure how we would all sound together, but it's a great plot now listening to it assembled. :thumbs: Excellent job by all actors involved so far.

I only found one small note, and even there I think it's highly optional to change or leave it. Just mentioning it for completeness' sake.

> at 38:00: "gives him money" - you can cut out "Fungoso", as the directions come after he speaks

The rest is perfect. Looking forward to the rest. Sorry about the missed line for the Drawer :? Did you PM Availle ? If not, I might do it, maybe she is already unsubscribed to the thread.

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Post by ToddHW » April 6th, 2019, 9:03 am

Fixed Act 4 as you suggest. One thing that surprised me was how much sense the play makes when you hear it all together while the individual parts - wonderfully done, thank you all - were so often very confusing by themselves. Makes me think I best be looking for another Jonson to follow this.

Yes, I PM'd Availle about the missing line in Act 5.

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Post by Kitty » April 6th, 2019, 9:09 am

ToddHW wrote:
April 6th, 2019, 9:03 am
One thing that surprised me was how much sense the play makes when you hear it all together while the individual parts - wonderfully done, thank you all - were so often very confusing by themselves. Makes me think I best be looking for another Jonson to follow this.
I'm definitely for it. Yes the plays are more complicated, but I think our actors are well up for the challenge. 8-) We're all getting better with each play.

Act 4 now PL ok.

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Post by Availle » April 6th, 2019, 4:57 pm

ToddHW wrote:
April 6th, 2019, 9:03 am

Yes, I PM'd Availle about the missing line in Act 5.
I'll record the fix tonight. Sorry 'bout missing that line.
Cheers,
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Post by Availle » April 7th, 2019, 7:08 am

Here's the missing line for the drawer:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_drawer_missingline.mp3

Sorry I missed that. I guess that's because I usually use the search function, and here the drawer's lines were marked with DRAW. No way I can find any others, obviously...
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Post by ToddHW » April 7th, 2019, 9:29 am

Thank you.

And Act 5 is now ready for final PL.

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Post by Kitty » April 7th, 2019, 2:27 pm

ToddHW wrote:
April 7th, 2019, 9:29 am
And Act 5 is now ready for final PL.
and Act 5 is absolutely PL ok. Wow I only now really realized the whole machinations of Macilente and how envious he constantly was. He is really the main mean baddie of the plot here. Excellently evilly played by Eva :thumbs: Poisoning the dog was awful though. :(

The only cuts I was considering was for all the Narrator's "drinks" in Tomas' performance of the cups, because he actually does drink there quite audibly, but in the end, I think you made the right choice to leave them in, Todd. The audible gulps are great, but breaking the flow a bit with the stage directions here actually works somehow (yes this time it really does) and it does not disturb at all. We could cut them all out, but it's just as fine like this.

So there is nothing that needs changing here. :thumbs: Excellent job.

Thanks for this entertaining hour. But now my ears need some rest.

Sonia

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Post by ToddHW » April 8th, 2019, 11:27 am

Unfortunately there is a Saviolina line missing at the end of Act 3. Probably becuz it is labeled in the script as being for "AV."
AV. 'Tis best leaving of you in admiration, sir.
Separate file, please.

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Post by silverquill » April 9th, 2019, 9:20 pm

Kitty wrote:
April 4th, 2019, 4:10 am

only one PL note for Cinedo Act 2:

> at about 0:07: missing line: “No, sir, but 'tis guess'd he will arrive presently, by his fore-runners.“
Ha! Can't believe I missed a third of my lines in this act. :wink:
Well, here it is with that line added.


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_cinedo_2_128kb.mp3

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Post by Foon » April 10th, 2019, 2:05 am

ToddHW wrote:
April 8th, 2019, 11:27 am

Unfortunately there is a Saviolina line missing at the end of Act 3. Probably becuz it is labeled in the script as being for "AV."
AV. 'Tis best leaving of you in admiration, sir.
Separate file, please.

Thanks, Todd
Hi Todd,
Will try to get this to you later this week!
Foon - Please correct my pronunciation!

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Post by Kitty » April 10th, 2019, 4:18 am

silverquill wrote:
April 9th, 2019, 9:20 pm
Ha! Can't believe I missed a third of my lines in this act. :wink:
if you put it like that it sounds awful :lol: luckily it wasn't a third of the Pinero stage directions :shock:

PL ok now, thanks !

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Post by Foon » April 11th, 2019, 7:51 am

ToddHW wrote:
April 8th, 2019, 11:27 am
Unfortunately there is a Saviolina line missing at the end of Act 3. Probably becuz it is labeled in the script as being for "AV."
AV. 'Tis best leaving of you in admiration, sir.
Separate file, please.

Thanks, Todd
Hi Todd,
Here's the missing line for 'Aviolina :mrgreen:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/outofhumour_saviolina_missingline.mp3
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