ah wonderful performance, Bhavya. This was my favourite scene for Angelique. She tries the begging for mercy thing first, but then she shows her real anger and distate for her husband. Very forcefully acted.
Loved it !
I have a few corrections for this act though:
> at 2:20
: (p. 267) “and that you have reason
to complain” – you say “you have no
reason”, which is wrong in this case
> at 4:56-5:00
(p. 268) “and with this knife...” you can cut this version
out here, as it’s repeated later once more
> at 5:58-5:59
(p. 269) “and who has not scrupled to take her own life” – I would cut the longer pause
> at 7:40-7:41
: (p. 270) “most extravagant behaviour” – pause
here also feels a bit long
> at 8:39
: (p. 272) “and I beg of you” – you say “I beg you
of you”, which sounds a bit strange
> at 9:09-9:12
: (p. 273) “overlook such insults, but, whatever violence” – long pause
> at 9:21-9:24
(p. 273) “will be of no use; we shall have to recommence” – also long pause
thank you for this great act ! Really well done.