FULL[PLAY]A Little Bit of Fluff by Walter W. Ellis - thw

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Post by ToddHW » March 16th, 2019, 4:54 am

Missing an Act 2 line for Tully hidden by a stage direction:
(Rising.) Perhaps if we keep quite quiet he’ll go away.
Separate file, please.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » March 16th, 2019, 6:15 am

ToddHW wrote:
March 16th, 2019, 4:54 am
Missing an Act 2 line for Tully hidden by a stage direction:
(Rising.) Perhaps if we keep quite quiet he’ll go away.
Separate file, please.

Thanks, Todd
Sorry about that; here you are:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_tully_x_128kb.mp3
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Post by ToddHW » March 16th, 2019, 6:47 am

Thank you.

(I had my own missed line in the same act too.)

Todd

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Post by mightyfelix » March 16th, 2019, 8:55 am

Those darn sneaky little things! :roll:

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Post by mightyfelix » March 16th, 2019, 10:54 am

For Mamie, act 3:

2:59 Missing line "Now the next one." (This line is said twice in succession. The directions for the second one are "sweetly." You've recorded it once, rather sweetly in my opinion. Maybe recording it for the first instance in a more stern or impatient tone?)

Otherwise, nothing missing, and very well done! Looking forward to act 2. :D

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Post by benderca » March 18th, 2019, 5:40 pm

mightyfelix wrote:
March 16th, 2019, 10:54 am
For Mamie, act 3:

2:59 Missing line "Now the next one." (This line is said twice in succession. The directions for the second one are "sweetly." You've recorded it once, rather sweetly in my opinion. Maybe recording it for the first instance in a more stern or impatient tone?)

Otherwise, nothing missing, and very well done! Looking forward to act 2. :D
Thanks, Devorah! Turns out I had recorded it twice, but cut one out while editing. Oops. Now the missing line is at 3:00.

Act 2 will be along shortly.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_mamiescott_3_128kb.mp3

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Post by benderca » March 18th, 2019, 7:49 pm

Okay, here is Act 2 for Fluffie, uh, i mean Mamie...

At 2:31-2:35 I gave you a shriek and some crying in case you want some background noise for: (_MAMIE shrieks and yells and kicks up her feet._)

And between 3:34-3:39 I throw in some background catfight calls for:
(_MAMIE and PAMELA both quarrel violently about it and argue madly
till fall of curtain. TULLY goes to MAMIE at the same time as JOHN
goes to PAMELA. They both throw the men off. TULLY has taken blanket
from arm-chair. JOHN is going to door L._)

...just in case. Feel free to trash them if you don't need them. Or I can delete them if it makes it easier for you.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_mamiescott_2_128kb.mp3


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Post by mightyfelix » March 20th, 2019, 9:30 pm

Thanks, TJ. Act 3 is PL ok. Act 2 has one extra line. Todd could cut it easily, but it may make his job easier to go ahead and remove it now.

2:39-2:41 There is a superfluous "no more tears" here.

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Post by benderca » Yesterday, 8:44 am

mightyfelix wrote:
March 20th, 2019, 9:30 pm
Thanks, TJ. Act 3 is PL ok. Act 2 has one extra line. Todd could cut it easily, but it may make his job easier to go ahead and remove it now.

2:39-2:41 There is a superfluous "no more tears" here.
Thanks, Devorah. I cut the extra "no more tears" out. The line starts at 2:38.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_mamiescott_2_128kb.mp3


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Post by mightyfelix » Yesterday, 10:30 am

benderca wrote:
Yesterday, 8:44 am
mightyfelix wrote:
March 20th, 2019, 9:30 pm
Thanks, TJ. Act 3 is PL ok. Act 2 has one extra line. Todd could cut it easily, but it may make his job easier to go ahead and remove it now.

2:39-2:41 There is a superfluous "no more tears" here.
Thanks, Devorah. I cut the extra "no more tears" out. The line starts at 2:38.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_mamiescott_2_128kb.mp3
PL ok! Mamie is all finished and ready to go out to dinner! :wink:

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Post by benderca » Yesterday, 1:59 pm

mightyfelix wrote:
Yesterday, 10:30 am

PL ok! Mamie is all finished and ready to go out to dinner! :wink:
Yay! Ready to go out for dinner and dance a little ragtime! :D
Thanks!

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