Ok Lika I will make a bit of an effort and listen slowly through your section, at least you can get a bit of feedback.
But I cannot concentrate too long on the difficult script, so I will need a few days to get through the section.
For now I have listened to the first page, up to 3:12 min
My first impression at least is very positive. Your sound is good and you speak slowly enough, at least for a native Russian speaker it will be no problem to listen to you. I always stopped between parts of sentences to get back on the original text
I think I found only one word that is not the same as in the script. Could you please listen to this part and see if I'm right ? But maybe I also heard it wrong and it's as you said. Just check here:
> at 2:20
: (p. 1) “Пуще
всего” – I hear something else, maybe “ойще
I don't know this word, so maybe it means the same.
In any case: you can correct it already, if it is wrong, but don't reupload yet. Let's wait till I listened to it all, in case there are other corrections. If you have to correct it, only re-record that one part of the sentence. No need to re-record the whole text again ! Just a "spot correction" is enough. Maybe those two words, or the whole sentence, if you prefer that. Not more.
Ok, now I need to rest, but I will try to check the second page tomorrow. At this rate I can finish the first story in 4 days
We will manage somehow. Don't worry. And maybe some kind Russian will help me out one day.