Hope all is well!
Chapter 16 is PL OK!
Nice job once again Curt!
COMPLETE[Children]Five Mice in a Mouse-trap by the Man in the Moon-ag
Hi Nemo,
It is indeed. my dear fellow Mainer. I hope everything is great on your end.
Thank you for the P:
Amy
It is indeed. my dear fellow Mainer. I hope everything is great on your end.
Thank you for the P:
Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
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Thank you for these, Kathleen!
-Amy
-Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
Hey Amy, it's me again!
Kathleen, section 8 is PL OK!
PL Notes for Section 9:
at around 2:30, "Now, Uncle Jack, I am ready!" cried the young horseman" is repeated (read twice) , so please cut one of these out.
at around 6:33 .... a stumble and repeat, "and whispered in the "
at 13:32, you read the name "Nibble" as "Nimble" ....same thing happened again at 14:21
Section 10:
at around 0:33, the text is: "for there is to be a match to-night between the North-east wind and a Southern tornado", and you read: "for there is to be a watch to-night between the North-east wind and a Southern tornado", which doesn't fit the story.
at around 7:49, in the song "Jip-py and Jim-my went shiv-er-ing home"is repeated (read twice), so please cut one of these out.
at around 12:40, the text is: "So we floated low till we came to a certain small Esquimaux village on the west of Greenland.". You read the word "Esquimaux" as ess-qui-mox" ...rhyming with fox . This is actually just an old spelling of "Eskimo". I had to look at the text when I heard this because I wasn't sure what you were saying, so I think it should be corrected, but I'll leave that to you to decide. ... same thing happened at 13:50, 15:52 and 16:30.
Kathleen, section 8 is PL OK!
PL Notes for Section 9:
at around 2:30, "Now, Uncle Jack, I am ready!" cried the young horseman" is repeated (read twice) , so please cut one of these out.
at around 6:33 .... a stumble and repeat, "and whispered in the "
at 13:32, you read the name "Nibble" as "Nimble" ....same thing happened again at 14:21
Section 10:
at around 0:33, the text is: "for there is to be a match to-night between the North-east wind and a Southern tornado", and you read: "for there is to be a watch to-night between the North-east wind and a Southern tornado", which doesn't fit the story.
at around 7:49, in the song "Jip-py and Jim-my went shiv-er-ing home"is repeated (read twice), so please cut one of these out.
at around 12:40, the text is: "So we floated low till we came to a certain small Esquimaux village on the west of Greenland.". You read the word "Esquimaux" as ess-qui-mox" ...rhyming with fox . This is actually just an old spelling of "Eskimo". I had to look at the text when I heard this because I wasn't sure what you were saying, so I think it should be corrected, but I'll leave that to you to decide. ... same thing happened at 13:50, 15:52 and 16:30.
Nemo
Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
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Took out repeats in 9 and 10. Nimble to Nibble. Esquimaux to Eskimo.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_09_richards_128kb.mp3
18:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_10_richards_128kb.mp3
17:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_09_richards_128kb.mp3
18:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_10_richards_128kb.mp3
17:10
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Awesome Kathleen ..... all edits perfectly done!2839reader wrote: ↑December 1st, 2018, 12:43 am Took out repeats in 9 and 10. Nimble to Nibble. Esquimaux to Eskimo.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_09_richards_128kb.mp3
18:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_10_richards_128kb.mp3
17:10
Amy, please mark sections 8,9 and 10 as PL OK in the MW .. (section 16 also)!
Thanks!
Nemo
Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
Hi Nemo,
MW updated. Thank you so much!! The end is in sight.
Amy
MW updated. Thank you so much!! The end is in sight.
Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
Finally...
Chapter 17 complete!- 17 CHAPTER XVII. Good-Bye 365 words Open
Length: 2:37.28 (m:ss.ss)
As I have some time this week, I would like to claim the Chapter 14
14 CHAPTER XIV. Stories Again 2710 words Open
14 CHAPTER XIV. Stories Again 2710 words Open
Thanks Curt! ... another wonderful reading!xios01 wrote: ↑December 1st, 2018, 2:41 pm
Finally...
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_17_richards_128kb.mp3
- 17 CHAPTER XVII. Good-Bye 365 words Open
Length: 2:37.28 (m:ss.ss)
This is perfectly PL OK ..except (and I hate to ask you to do this), but at the end you only have 2 seconds of silence which could cause the end to be clipped off on some audio players. Would you add an additional 3 seconds of silence to the end and upload again for a spot check please.
Nemo
Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
Thoreau - “Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake."
Whoops... my bad... part of my routine but I slpped checking that one...NemoR wrote: ↑December 1st, 2018, 3:16 pmThanks Curt! ... another wonderful reading!xios01 wrote: ↑December 1st, 2018, 2:41 pm
Finally...
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_17_richards_128kb.mp3
- 17 CHAPTER XVII. Good-Bye 365 words Open
Length: 2:37.28 (m:ss.ss)
This is perfectly PL OK ..except (and I hate to ask you to do this), but at the end you only have 2 seconds of silence which could cause the end to be clipped off on some audio players. Would you add an additional 3 seconds of silence to the end and upload again for a spot check please.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/fivemice_17_richards_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 2:42.09 (m:ss.ss)
Super! Thank you, Nemo! Thank you, Curt!
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood
That will be great. It is the last one. I will move us to Readers Found.
Thanks!
Amy
In the mind, or consciousness of the Earth this flower first lay latent as a dream. Perhaps, in her consciousness, it nested as that which in us corresponds to a little thought.--A.Blackwood