[poetry] From Queen's Gardens - A Chorus of Many Voices by Various -ck

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Post by Carolin » September 4th, 2018, 11:55 pm

Thank you all!
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Post by Carolin » September 5th, 2018, 12:02 am

Hi lynda,

Sorry i didnt post about the double claim yesterday. It happens rather often that you visit athread in which a claim has been posted but was not yet entered into the magic window - even bcs have to sleep haha. I expect (experienced) readers to realise this and to read the last few posts in a project to take them into account.

In poetry, this is not a big problem as all doubles can be submitted to the short poetry collection, but in books this is very important. You can find the current short poetry collection in readers wanted. Thank you!
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Post by Foon » September 6th, 2018, 5:27 am

Kirsten,
Section 1 is PL OK--what a beautiful poem :9:
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Post by Foon » September 6th, 2018, 5:29 am

Lynda,

Section 16 PL note:
0:03 I hear "Mrs. Hermans" whereas the poem is written by Mrs. Hemans.

Carolin, this is a typo in the MW, might be worth fixing the author?

Sections 13, 14, 15, 17 all PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by Lmnei » September 6th, 2018, 7:48 am

Carolin wrote:
September 5th, 2018, 12:02 am
Hi lynda,

Sorry i didnt post about the double claim yesterday. It happens rather often that you visit athread in which a claim has been posted but was not yet entered into the magic window - even bcs have to sleep haha. I expect (experienced) readers to realise this and to read the last few posts in a project to take them into account.

In poetry, this is not a big problem as all doubles can be submitted to the short poetry collection, but in books this is very important. You can find the current short poetry collection in readers wanted. Thank you!
It was not a problem Carolin - first time I have made that mistake! Now the Short Poetry benefits :clap:

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Post by Lmnei » September 6th, 2018, 12:13 pm

Foon wrote:
September 6th, 2018, 5:29 am
Lynda,

Section 16 PL note:
0:03 I hear "Mrs. Hermans" whereas the poem is written by Mrs. Hemans.

Carolin, this is a typo in the MW, might be worth fixing the author?

Sections 13, 14, 15, 17 all PL OK :thumbs:
Here is Section 16 back Foon - good catch!

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_16_various_128kb.mp3 - 1:57

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Post by Foon » September 6th, 2018, 12:22 pm

Thanks Lynda, all good now :thumbs:
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Post by Carolin » September 10th, 2018, 1:52 am

Thank you all :thumbs:
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Post by Carolin » September 10th, 2018, 11:12 pm

Thank you :thumbs:
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Post by Foon » September 11th, 2018, 5:42 am

Hi Lynda,

Poems 19, 20, 22, 23, 24 are all PL OK :thumbs:

PL notes:

18
0:42 I think here the word "fir'd" should be pronounced as "fired", or at least the fir part of it--to keep the rhyme with "inspir'd"

21.
0:03 I hear "Anna W. Waring" whereas the author Anna L. Waring
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Post by Carolin » September 13th, 2018, 7:56 am

Thank you foon!
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Post by Lmnei » September 15th, 2018, 10:23 pm

Foon wrote:
September 11th, 2018, 5:42 am
Hi Lynda,

Poems 19, 20, 22, 23, 24 are all PL OK :thumbs:

PL notes:

18
0:42 I think here the word "fir'd" should be pronounced as "fired", or at least the fir part of it--to keep the rhyme with "inspir'd"

21.
0:03 I hear "Anna W. Waring" whereas the author Anna L. Waring
Hi Foon!

Here are my corrected Sections from above -

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_18_various_128kb.mp3 - 2:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_21_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:59

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Post by Carolin » September 16th, 2018, 10:54 pm

Thank you :thumbs:
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Post by Foon » September 17th, 2018, 6:22 am

Lmnei wrote:
September 15th, 2018, 10:23 pm

Hi Foon!

Here are my corrected Sections from above -

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_18_various_128kb.mp3 - 2:09
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/manyvoices_21_various_128kb.mp3 - 0:59

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Thanks Lynda, both PL OK! :thumbs:
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