OPEN[PLAY]Trelawny of the Wells by Pinero - thw

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Post by Kitty » September 8th, 2018, 1:02 am

Availle wrote:
September 7th, 2018, 7:53 pm
I could read Sarah in the first act if that's okay with you! :D
sure Ava, I'll sign you up, thank you :)

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Post by Availle » September 10th, 2018, 3:52 am

Here is Sarah, the maid (sorry 'bout the filename)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_sarah]_1_128kb.mp3

I gave you two "kerridges", not sure which one is out of breath enough :wink:
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Post by Kitty » September 10th, 2018, 12:05 pm

Availle wrote:
September 10th, 2018, 3:52 am
Here is Sarah, the maid (sorry 'bout the filename)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_sarah]_1_128kb.mp3

I gave you two "kerridges", not sure which one is out of breath enough :wink:
sorry, somehow I missed this one....

Sarah is definitely out of breath here. :thumbs: Well done. I couldn't decide which one is better, so I let Todd decide that later on.

Yes the filename didn't download for me here, but I managed to get it to open in the end.

PL ok. Thanks

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Post by snaresamn » September 15th, 2018, 8:32 pm

May I claim section 10, Clara de Foenix, his grandchild, Act 2?

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Post by Kitty » September 16th, 2018, 1:09 am

snaresamn wrote:
September 15th, 2018, 8:32 pm
May I claim section 10, Clara de Foenix, his grandchild, Act 2?
absolutely :9: thank you !

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Post by Kitty » September 17th, 2018, 2:53 am

wonderful, TJ. You're simply great in this role and I'm glad you chose that one :9: You play a dignified landlady to some bohemian artists to perfection :mrgreen: I loved every minute of the performance.

All the lines are in and flawless, but I have a few cuts to mention:

for Act 1:

> at 4:17: repeat “Another poor part, I suppose, Mr. Wrench?” – is there one version you prefer or should Todd decide ?

> at 5:21 and 5:21: Tom. [Grandiloquently.] Miss Imogen Parrott, of the Olympic Theatre. – this is an error in the script. It’s actually Tom saying this, so you can cut out both quotes

for Act 3:

> at 0:32: “Ah—h I” – a common typo in this text unfortunately, it should be an exclamation mark and not the word “I”.

thanks for the splendid part !

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Post by ToddHW » September 21st, 2018, 1:41 pm

I have claimed Gower.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » September 21st, 2018, 1:50 pm

ToddHW wrote:
September 21st, 2018, 1:41 pm
I have claimed Gower.
excellent choice ! But I hadn't even noticed you had not yet claimed any role :shock:

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Post by silverquill » September 22nd, 2018, 7:11 am

Just an update. I've been working on the editing for stage directions. I just have to put in the corrections and additions for Acts I and II that I have recorded. Initial editing pass done for III and IV. Things got a little crazy this week, but that is kind of normal :mrgreen:

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Post by silverquill » October 8th, 2018, 8:11 am

Kitty wrote:
September 4th, 2018, 12:25 pm


Here are my notes for Act 2:

> at about 3:24: missing line: "As Clara, reaches her husband, he lurches forward into her arms."

> at about 14:11: missing line: "Sir William, in the same tone."

> at 16:10: "Charles. [Behind his hand.]" - this is Charles speaking, the script is a bit messed up, but you need to include the name here

> at 21:58: "Colpoys [Behind Rose, imitating Gadd.]" - same here, Colpoys needs to be included

thank you, Larry. :)

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This should be an easy Spot PL for Act II. NEW time stamps above.


https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/trelawnyofthewells_stagedirection_2_128kb.mp3

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Post by silverquill » October 8th, 2018, 8:39 am

Kitty wrote:
July 27th, 2018, 4:48 am


> at 3:49: "pointing the chastening moral" - you say "chastising", which is a bit of a difference

> at about 15:20: missing line: "Retreating and talking under his breath."

> at about 22:36: missing line: "Gadd, to Imogen"


Sonia
I hope I did what you wanted with the Persons of the Play. I'm glad to make any changes, of course.

Corrections done, again with NEW time stamps, of course. :D

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/trelawnyofthewells_stagedirection_1_128kb.mp3

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Post by ToddHW » October 8th, 2018, 2:06 pm

Thank you.

Todd

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Post by Kitty » October 9th, 2018, 12:51 am

silverquill wrote:
October 8th, 2018, 8:11 am
This should be an easy Spot PL for Act II. NEW time stamps above.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/trelawnyofthewells_stagedirection_2_128kb.mp3
Larry, I fear you have forgotten to reupload both files, because I can hear no difference yet. :(

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