OPEN[PLAY]At The Sign Of The Greedy Pig by Charles Brooks - thw

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Post by pschempf » May 14th, 2018, 7:43 pm

Kitty wrote:
May 14th, 2018, 1:27 am
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There is only one tiny thing you can cut out:

> at 5:51 and at 5:57: “our faculty bids me...” (p. 163): we only need it once here, maybe there was one you wanted to delete ? :hmm: I did check the whole part twice, because he so often says almost the same things here, and I wanted to make doubly sure, but I really think one of these lines is too much, if I'm not mistaken.
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Sonia -

Those lines were remarkably similar. :hmm: One has now been deleted.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/signofthegreedypig_syndic_1_128kb.mp3
Track length: 8:52
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Post by Kitty » May 15th, 2018, 12:10 am

pschempf wrote:
May 14th, 2018, 7:43 pm
Those lines were remarkably similar. :hmm: One has now been deleted.
thank you Phil, now it's definitely PL ok. :)

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Post by benderca » May 15th, 2018, 7:49 am

pschempf wrote:
May 12th, 2018, 5:05 pm
Todd -

I was debating between Syndic and Bombastes, but I guess that's been settled. May I have sections 13 and 14 (Syndic)?
I was debating between Bombastes and his assistant, Jules -- there are so many fun parts in this play... I wouldn't mind switching, but I see you're already full into the Syndic role, which you do fantastically, I might add. :clap:

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Post by pschempf » May 17th, 2018, 4:05 pm

Thank you Sonia and TJ. Now we'll see if I can manage to keep the pace. Here's the syndic, act 2 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/signofthegreedypig_syndic_2_128kb.mp3
Track length: 8:05
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Post by Kitty » May 18th, 2018, 3:27 am

pschempf wrote:
May 17th, 2018, 4:05 pm
Thank you Sonia and TJ. Now we'll see if I can manage to keep the pace. Here's the syndic, act 2 -
"Modesty is my grievous fault" :lol: I had to snigger at that comment. He probably really believes that :mrgreen:

Excellent job again, Phil. You play the slimy politician absolutely wonderfully. :9: And nothing is missing this time as far as I can see, so this is totally PL ok.

You're our first character to be completed. Thanks !

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Post by pschempf » May 18th, 2018, 7:33 am

Thank you Sonia - maybe a future career path for me. :roll:
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Post by alanmapstone » May 19th, 2018, 4:08 am

Yank act 2. I have included the song lines on pages 200 and 202 as the preceding stage directions imply that these lines should be sung by Yank.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/signofthegreedypig_yank_2.mp3
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Post by Kitty » May 19th, 2018, 4:54 am

alanmapstone wrote:
May 19th, 2018, 4:08 am
Yank act 2. I have included the song lines on pages 200 and 202 as the preceding stage directions imply that these lines should be sung by Yank.
excellent, Alan. I love the song :9: it's so macabre, yet entertaining. Somehow gives the hangman a chilling touch. I suppose, since Todd has not made any written prohibition of DO NOT SING in the MW, this play will feature the songs. Which is probably important for the final scene where the ballad monger has to sing for his life.

I love the whole performance. Could I only trouble you with one more line please ? Maybe you could join the crowd cheering on the new mayor in the end, so we have a big crowd whooping. Just paste it right at the end of your file:

> p. 212: All: "Hooray !"

thank you so much. The role was really fitting to your voice. You made a great choice here.

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Post by alanmapstone » May 20th, 2018, 5:51 am

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Post by Kitty » May 20th, 2018, 8:49 am

alanmapstone wrote:
May 20th, 2018, 5:51 am
Hooray - as requested!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/signofthegreedypig_hooray_2.mp3
oh you gave us even two for good measure :mrgreen: thank you, Alan, I'm sure you'll sound great in the crowd. It's a bit exceeding volume, but Todd will surely equalize this superbly.

PL ok. I'll create a new section for you in the MW.

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