[poetry] Sea Poems by Cale Young Rice -ck

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Post by silverquill » June 14th, 2018, 9:29 pm

elizaswann wrote:
June 13th, 2018, 4:26 am
Hi Carolin,

i'm so sorry for all the issues.

here is the updated link for section 48, In a Storm:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/seapoems_48_rice_128kb.mp3

duration: 0:56

Eliza
Good reading :thumbs:
There are several issues that need attention, however, as follows:

Needs “To a Petrel” at the beginning
0:37 to end == someone shouting in the background.
Closing silence is too long at 7 secs. Should be closer to 5.

The background voices might pass in a long prose piece, but in a short poem, they are very noticeable and distracting. Since this poem is so short, you might consider a new recording.

Just upload the new file under the same name the post the link and new file length here, and I'll check it again.
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Post by Carolin » June 15th, 2018, 11:13 pm

Thank you all :thumbs:
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Post by anushar04 » Yesterday, 12:29 am

silverquill wrote:
June 14th, 2018, 9:24 pm
I thoroughly enjoyed your fine reading :D
Just one note that needs attention:
69 Resurgence
Closing silence is too long at nearly 10 secs. Should be closer to 5.
Thank you for your very kind words! :)
Ooooh, I don't know how I missed this - here is the reupload after chopping off the extra silence.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/seapoems_69_rice_128kb.mp3 [01:54]
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Post by Carolin » Yesterday, 11:58 pm

Thank you :thumbs:
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