EDITING [DR] An Old-Fashioned Girl by Louisa May Alcott - tg

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Post by BookAngel7 » June 13th, 2018, 2:39 pm

WiltedScribe wrote:
June 13th, 2018, 11:44 am
Chapters 5, 8 and 17 have been corrected and re-uploaded! :)
All spot-checked and PL OK! That's a wrap for Tom, and we are all ready for editing! :clap:

Thanks again for jumping in to help out!

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Post by Elizabby » June 13th, 2018, 3:27 pm

Brilliant work everyone! Looking forward to listening to some more finished chapters! This is a great book!
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Post by fiddlesticks » June 14th, 2018, 7:52 pm

~Tiffany
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"The world is full of evil, and lies, and pain, and death, you can’t hide from it; you can only face it.
The question is, when you do, how do you respond? Who do you become?"
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Post by Elizabby » June 15th, 2018, 3:34 pm

Chapter 18 is PL OK!
Coming Soon: An Ideal Husband

Dram Reads: Dr Dolittle's Voyages
Play: The Mikado - 2 male chorus parts open!
Books: Heart Talks on Holiness Shaggy Man in Oz

FULL: W&D Wishing Horse Captain Salt Amulet

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Post by fiddlesticks » June 19th, 2018, 10:03 am

for the Dramatis Personae I cannot find narrator's (stoogeswoman) "narrator, read by..." it is not included in the dp or chapter 1
~Tiffany
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"The world is full of evil, and lies, and pain, and death, you can’t hide from it; you can only face it.
The question is, when you do, how do you respond? Who do you become?"
——————————
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Post by fiddlesticks » June 19th, 2018, 10:33 am

Polly (HannahMary) is also missing that line, "Polly, read by..."
~Tiffany
—————
"The world is full of evil, and lies, and pain, and death, you can’t hide from it; you can only face it.
The question is, when you do, how do you respond? Who do you become?"
——————————
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Post by fiddlesticks » June 19th, 2018, 12:46 pm

~Tiffany
—————
"The world is full of evil, and lies, and pain, and death, you can’t hide from it; you can only face it.
The question is, when you do, how do you respond? Who do you become?"
——————————
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Post by HannahMary » June 19th, 2018, 1:40 pm

fiddlesticks wrote:
June 19th, 2018, 10:33 am
Polly (HannahMary) is also missing that line, "Polly, read by..."
I forgot it for quite a while :oops: but did tack it onto the beginning of my chapter 13 lines. Let me know if you need me to submit it again!
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Post by fiddlesticks » June 19th, 2018, 1:55 pm

Got it, Thanks!
~Tiffany
—————
"The world is full of evil, and lies, and pain, and death, you can’t hide from it; you can only face it.
The question is, when you do, how do you respond? Who do you become?"
——————————
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Post by Elizabby » June 20th, 2018, 4:52 am

Chapter 2 is PL OK!
Coming Soon: An Ideal Husband

Dram Reads: Dr Dolittle's Voyages
Play: The Mikado - 2 male chorus parts open!
Books: Heart Talks on Holiness Shaggy Man in Oz

FULL: W&D Wishing Horse Captain Salt Amulet

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Post by Twinkle88 » June 20th, 2018, 8:10 am

fiddlesticks wrote:
June 19th, 2018, 10:03 am
for the Dramatis Personae I cannot find narrator's (stoogeswoman) "narrator, read by..." it is not included in the dp or chapter 1
Here you go:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_00_narrator2.mp3

(It's a clip from another project she narrated.)
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Post by fiddlesticks » June 20th, 2018, 9:03 am

Thanks! Wil add and upload right away :)
~Tiffany
—————
"The world is full of evil, and lies, and pain, and death, you can’t hide from it; you can only face it.
The question is, when you do, how do you respond? Who do you become?"
——————————
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Post by fiddlesticks » June 20th, 2018, 9:17 am

Here is the Dramatis Personae! I maybe should have checked, but I just did it in the order they were in the character list, I can change it if you want a different order.
Time: 2:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/oldfashionedgirl_00_alcott_128kb.mp3
~Tiffany
—————
"The world is full of evil, and lies, and pain, and death, you can’t hide from it; you can only face it.
The question is, when you do, how do you respond? Who do you become?"
——————————
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Post by Twinkle88 » June 20th, 2018, 8:02 pm

Oh, yes, that's perfect -- that's the order I planned for it to go in. Thank you! :)
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