[Poetry] The Haunted Hour - mas

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Post by svonb002 » October 13th, 2018, 10:00 pm

~ Stefan V.

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Post by Ravie13 » October 14th, 2018, 12:53 am

Oh no - I didn't abandon this on my end. I had set a done date of October 31st, 2018. I've been diligently working on it behind the scenes. Any way to turn this back into a solo?

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Post by Ravie13 » October 14th, 2018, 3:59 am

Let me change my request. I have about 40 hours into this project already so I would like this to be a Solo. Since this version is now being worked on by multiple readers, can I have my parts that are in this version removed and a new project created that is just solo me?
Ravie13 wrote:
October 14th, 2018, 12:53 am
Oh no - I didn't abandon this on my end. I had set a done date of October 31st, 2018. I've been diligently working on it behind the scenes. Any way to turn this back into a solo?

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Post by linny » October 14th, 2018, 6:25 am

Ravie13 wrote:
October 14th, 2018, 3:59 am
Let me change my request. I have about 40 hours into this project already so I would like this to be a Solo. Since this version is now being worked on by multiple readers, can I have my parts that are in this version removed and a new project created that is just solo me?
Hi Ravie,
I'll open up your two posted sections here so you can use them in a new project. You will need to start a new project in the launch pad. Please remember to post at least every 2 months so we know you are still working on the project. If you don't check in then we have no way of knowing.

Be well,
Linny

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Post by linny » October 14th, 2018, 6:31 am

MW updated. Sections 0 and 1 have been orphaned.

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Post by adr6090 » October 20th, 2018, 2:23 pm

April

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Post by gloryb » October 20th, 2018, 4:04 pm

Hello, Here is Section 9 - Sea Ghosts Part 2

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/hauntedhour_9_widdemer_128kb.mp3

Time is 13:50

Gloria

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Post by NemoR » October 20th, 2018, 9:08 pm

linny wrote:
October 14th, 2018, 6:31 am
MW updated. Sections 0 and 1 have been orphaned.
Hey Linny,

I can pick these two little orphans up!
Nemo

“The Tao is very close, but everyone looks far away.
Life is very simple, but everyone seeks difficulty.”

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Post by linny » October 21st, 2018, 7:39 am

Thank you all. I'll get caught up on PLing today.

Nemo, thank you for picking up those sections. :thumbs:

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Post by linny » October 21st, 2018, 8:20 am

Stefan,
Section 13 is PL OK. :thumbs:

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Post by NemoR » October 21st, 2018, 8:37 am

Nemo

“The Tao is very close, but everyone looks far away.
Life is very simple, but everyone seeks difficulty.”

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Post by linny » October 21st, 2018, 9:01 am

April,
Great job on section 11. Just a few PL notes to clear up.

0:28-0:47 is the end of the prior poem. Please delete from “Old tray licked all the oysters up” through “Put no believe in Ghosts!”

2:44 word change - “Now lithe and listen, Sir Bray, to me
I hear to tell

22:39 missing last part found on page 103 (table of contents) or 122 (slider bar). Starts with The state of society seldom requires and end with Of the sweet face you look for – A SARACEN’S Head!

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Post by linny » October 21st, 2018, 9:05 am

NemoR wrote:
October 21st, 2018, 8:37 am
Linny, Sections 0 and 1 for PL .... just in case you have nothing else to do :roll:
Funny man! :lol:

Last week I finished my MBA program and this week has been full on catching up with life. Today is LV day! Your sections are added to my downloads. It will be a few hours but I'll get it done today. :mrgreen:

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Post by NemoR » October 21st, 2018, 9:06 am

linny wrote:
October 21st, 2018, 9:05 am


Last week I finished my MBA program and this week has been full on catching up with life.
Yeah! .... Congrats Linny! :clap:
Nemo

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Life is very simple, but everyone seeks difficulty.”

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Post by linny » October 21st, 2018, 9:51 am

Gloria,
I really enjoy your pacing and rhythm on section 9. :thumbs:

I did however find a few word changes which impact intent.

2:29 added word and word change– Such entertainment could never pall! Rambout Van Dam took his fill of all;
I hear I. It’s an explanation mark.
I hear till

4:01 word change – Old Dunderberg with grumbling roar
I hear wrote

5:01 word change – Their ghostly bulwarks glow.
I hear gostly

5:47 word change – From ruined stern to prow;
I hear stem

7:03 word change – By storm or rock or fight
I hear tight

12:42 missing word – Locked in fight with phantom foeman,

13:44 – End of section 9
I hear End of section 9 part 2


Note: For the next section, after the beginning reading of the section title you don't have to read the section title again before the rest of the poems.
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