COMPLETE(Spanish) Enterrado en vida - Arnold Bennett-mas

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Post by MaryAnnSpiegel » January 15th, 2018, 7:37 am

Victor,
I'll add Kitty as the DPL.
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Post by Kitty » January 17th, 2018, 3:26 am

ok Victor, I started and listened to the whole of chapter 1. So this Priam Farll is so shy that he doesn't want to contradict the doctor, and now they all think that he is the servant ? And this cousin throws him out of his own house ? :shock: I wonder what will happen next and how he will get his real life back.

Sections 3-6 all PL ok and beautifully narrated, as always :9: I love the extreme shy tone of voice for the protagonist.

The only thing I found a bit startling is, that you say each time "Capitulo 1" and then another title. Maybe a subtitle number would have been better here, but I agree, it's not mentioned in the book either. So I guess that's how it should be done.

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Post by Kitty » January 18th, 2018, 3:08 am

Listened to the 4 sections of Chapter 2 today. How can anybody be SO SHY :lol: He is being bullied by everybody and too scared to say something.

Well, Sections 9 & 10 are already PL ok.

But I have two small notes for Sections 7 & 8:

Section 7:

> from 4:14-4:26: (p. 32): “Priam le dió una moneda [...] de Leek.” – this sentence is repeated and you can cut out one of the versions

Section 8:

> at 8:41: (p. 40) “uno” (1) – this number between brackets is referring to a footnote down at the page. Since you never read footnotes, you don’t have to say the number either, it’s not part of the text

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Post by Kitty » January 18th, 2018, 5:20 am

Finished the 4 sections of Chapter 3 :) It is so strange that everybody thinks he is dead. Nowadays that would not happen with the internet, where you can see photos of the person :lol:

Sections 11 & 13 are PL ok

Notes for Sections 12 & 14:

Section 12:

> at 0:04: you forgot to say the title of the book and the disclaimer

Section 14:

> at 0:04: the same here, you forgot the title and intro

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Post by Kitty » January 18th, 2018, 7:04 am

ok and Chapter 4 is also finished. This scene where Priam Farll is present at his own funeral is simply surrealistic :shock: I think at this point nobody would believe him that he is the real person. Unless he finds somebody who really knows him, maybe this Lady Sophia. I'm sure they will meet again.

PL note for Section 16:

> at 2:54: (p. 87) “Valian la pena [...] de la nacion: repeated twice

Sections 15, 17 and 18 are PL ok.

Enough for today. I think now I need a rest

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Post by Kitty » January 19th, 2018, 5:05 am

Chapter 5 completely PL ok (all three sections) :clap:

Now I could have guessed that sooner or later Mrs Challice would bully Priam into marrying her :lol: well maybe it's the best for him, so he can stay quiet at home again and let her do all the talking.

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Post by Kitty » January 19th, 2018, 5:56 am

Chapter 6 finished. Phew there was a lengthy chapter. Now I need some rest.

one PL note for Section 22:

> at 4:16-4:33: (p. 127) “Priam aprecio de verdad ...” – sentence repeated, can be cut out once

Sections 23 and 24 are PL ok. Although, if you wish you can cut down the end silence of 24 to 5 seconds. Remember, I told you already that we keep the standard 5 seconds now for all sections, even if they are over 30 minutes long. But it's up to you, if you prefer 10 seconds, that's probably fine too.

Have a nice weekend :9:

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Post by phileasfogg » January 19th, 2018, 1:01 pm

Thanks a lot Sonia, i didn´t reply beacuse I´ve been so busy these days, but I appreciate a lot all your comments and corrections, I´ll fix all of them once i finished to edit the chapters I have recorded. Thanks :) :D :wink:
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Post by Kitty » January 22nd, 2018, 2:21 am

Chapter 7 checked. I find it so sad that Priam is now with a wife who cannot appreciate at all his art and doesn't even believe him. :( But now that he is painting again, some people may see that the style is the same than that of the great artist. His secret will soon be out.

Sections 26 & 27 are PL ok.

One note for Section 25:

> 7:02-7:28: (p. 152) “porque él era él [...] describirlos – sentence repeated, can be cut out once

I see you have uploaded more over night :shock:

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Post by Kitty » January 22nd, 2018, 2:59 am

Chapter 8 was wonderful :clap:

this section where the wife and sons of Leek show up is simply HILARIOUS. You play them so well, you give them excellent voices. The sons sound like gangsters, which is especially funny since they are supposed to be priests. :lol: And the merging of voices has been excellently done :thumbs:

Now I wonder how Priam will get out of this situation. I hope they don't show up anymore.

Sections 28, 29 and 30 are PL ok.

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Post by Kitty » January 22nd, 2018, 4:49 am

Chapter 9 finished. Ah finally someone who seems to guess at his real identity. This Mr Oxford could become a nuisance now to Priam. Excellently narrated again !

Sections 31, 32 and 33 PL ok

on PL note for Section 34:

> 13:16-13:21 (p. 211) “si hubiera tenido valor para ello” – repeated

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Post by Kitty » January 22nd, 2018, 5:38 am

and I finished Chapter 10 as well (the parts you already uploaded, seems to be a longer chapter).

So now it's out in the open and they are hiding from the paparazzi, did I understand this correctly ? :shock:

Sections 35, 36, 37 and 38: PL ok

one PL note for Section 39: (there's always one, sorry :lol: )

> 4:46-4:49 (p. 239) “y le oyó pedir” – repeated

fantastic job, Victor. We are nearing the end soon. :9: and now I definitely need a rest. :mrgreen:

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Post by phileasfogg » January 22nd, 2018, 2:06 pm

Ok, really.. thanks a lot for the boost you gave me with your corrections, i started this book last year but i abandoned it for a while and since you posted to be DPL i hurried my pace and finished it. Ok, meanwhile you check all the rest, I'll work in the repetitions I¡ve made. Sorry for many mistakes i make, but although i edit quicker than i did before still is the fact i hate more being volunteer of this and many times i skip the repetitions. If somebody some day pay us for all the work we do in Librivox we probably become as rich as Priam Farll.
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Post by phileasfogg » January 22nd, 2018, 4:14 pm

Re4adyyyyyyy :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Post by Kitty » January 23rd, 2018, 12:59 am

phileasfogg wrote:Sorry for many mistakes i make, but although i edit quicker than i did before still is the fact i hate more being volunteer of this and many times i skip the repetitions.
:? I'm sorry, I did not really understand you. Are you angry with me because I pointed out the repetitions ? :(

Well, I checked the 9 reuploaded sections now, and all the repetitions are cut out. :thumbs: Everything PL ok.

I try to do the remaining sections today still, if I can.

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