I'm so glad this correction wasn't Persephone. I stumbled over her name time and time again.
Full sentence replacement - (7:42-7:47) Demeter had the care of all the plants, fruits and grains in the world.
I also replaced this area - (14:24 - 14:35) Apollo saw her and rose higher and higher into the sky. A gentle breeze came rustling from the southeast, and whispered something to everything he met.