COMPLETE [fiction] Elsie Venner by Oliver Wendell Holmes -ck
thank you so much!
Carolin
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Turning it over in your mind will not plough the field.
thank you so much
Carolin
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Sorry I haven't been keeping up with PLing - school got crazy (gotta love first year uni). I'll get these chapters done by the end of the weekend, latest.
Melissa
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?
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Turning it over in your mind will not plough the field.
Thank you
Carolin
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PL Notes for sections 18-21
Section 18
I know that PLing for this is standard not word-perfect, but at 4:33 the word "biographical" is said as biological. The only reason I point this out is that I think the words are different enough to warrant a mention, but it is up to you Deon, if you want to change it.
@ 9:31 there is a skip in the line "never groped in the dirt and ashes"
Finally, there are several points when I can hear a sharp inhale. Carolin, could you take a listen and let me know if these need to be edited out? The first few times they happen are at 2:18, 2:34, and 4:30. If you think they are a problem, I will give the rest of the times, but if not then I know that I am just being too anal.
Sections 19 has the same problem as section 18, in regards to the inhaling - the first few times are 2:00, 3:01, and 3:13. Again Carolin if you could take a listen and let me know what you think, I'd appreciate it.
Sections 20 and 21 are both PL OK! Good reading Deon!
Melissa
Section 18
I know that PLing for this is standard not word-perfect, but at 4:33 the word "biographical" is said as biological. The only reason I point this out is that I think the words are different enough to warrant a mention, but it is up to you Deon, if you want to change it.
@ 9:31 there is a skip in the line "never groped in the dirt and ashes"
Finally, there are several points when I can hear a sharp inhale. Carolin, could you take a listen and let me know if these need to be edited out? The first few times they happen are at 2:18, 2:34, and 4:30. If you think they are a problem, I will give the rest of the times, but if not then I know that I am just being too anal.
Sections 19 has the same problem as section 18, in regards to the inhaling - the first few times are 2:00, 3:01, and 3:13. Again Carolin if you could take a listen and let me know what you think, I'd appreciate it.
Sections 20 and 21 are both PL OK! Good reading Deon!
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?
Thank you melissa!
Usually, breath sounds are totally fine. i cant listen to this section now unfortunately because im in the train, but i think it is probably alright thank you!
Usually, breath sounds are totally fine. i cant listen to this section now unfortunately because im in the train, but i think it is probably alright thank you!
Carolin
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Thanks for the PL. I've fixed the two places you noted. Have a good day!
Thanks for the PL. I've fixed the two places you noted. Have a good day!
Turning it over in your mind will not plough the field.
thank you so much deon
Carolin
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Hi 5Tommy00!
Welcome to LibriVox!
Unfortunately, chapters 1&2 have already been recorded. Chapter 4 is open if you want to record an earlier chapter. If you want to record any other chapters look in the last column in the magic window. That column will tell you the status of any one chapter (either Open, Assigned, or PL Ok). Chapters you can sign up for will have the status Open.
Melissa
Welcome to LibriVox!
Unfortunately, chapters 1&2 have already been recorded. Chapter 4 is open if you want to record an earlier chapter. If you want to record any other chapters look in the last column in the magic window. That column will tell you the status of any one chapter (either Open, Assigned, or PL Ok). Chapters you can sign up for will have the status Open.
Melissa
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?