[COMPLETE]PLAY: Exiles by James Joyce - ans

gloriana · Post by **gloriana** » June 23rd, 2015, 6:18 am

kathrinee wrote:I can DPL, if you still need somebody to do that

I would love that, Kathrine! Thank you so much!

Post by **annise** » June 23rd, 2015, 8:49 am

kathrinee wrote:I can DPL, if you still need somebody to do that

Welcome aboard - you should have MW access now

Anne

gloriana · Post by **gloriana** » June 23rd, 2015, 9:17 am

Thank you, Anne!

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 23rd, 2015, 10:30 am

Great, thank you

(I even celebrated Bloomsday a little bit this year, after reading Ulysses for a course - it'll be nice to listen to this play in its constituent parts, and as it comes together)

beeber · Post by **beeber** » June 24th, 2015, 5:44 am

Here is Robert Hand, Act 2 (34:56).
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/exiles_roberthand_2.mp3

Bruce

gloriana · Post by **gloriana** » June 24th, 2015, 10:54 am

Thank you, Bruce!

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 24th, 2015, 1:10 pm

Archie act 1 is PL OK!

Archie act 3 (titled archie_2) has two duplicate sentences
00:47 "Goodbye, mama! Is Papie up? Goodbye, mama! Is papie up?" Does this need to be cut out now, or can it wait to the editing together of all the parts? (I'll wait to update the MW till I hear back

)

Sounds great!

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 24th, 2015, 1:13 pm

Fishwoman act 3 is PL OK

gloriana · Post by **gloriana** » June 24th, 2015, 1:18 pm

kathrinee wrote:Archie act 1 is PL OK!

Archie act 3 (titled archie_2) has two duplicate sentences
00:47 "Goodbye, mama! Is Papie up? Goodbye, mama! Is papie up?" Does this need to be cut out now, or can it wait to the editing together of all the parts? (I'll wait to update the MW till I hear back )

Sounds great!

I can cut that out during editing - could you leave me a note in the MW to remind me, if you wouldn't mind? Thank you!

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 24th, 2015, 1:34 pm

Thanks, Gloriana, will do

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 24th, 2015, 1:37 pm

PL note Beatrice act 1:
the volume is low (80.7), please amplify. Also, there is a constant background hum. Maybe it can be removed with the noise removal in Audacity.
3:00 - repeat "It brought me near to death. It made m It brought me near to death. It made me see things differently"
3:50 - I hear "If there were converts in your religion" instead of "convents" and "our religion"

The rest is all good!

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 24th, 2015, 1:51 pm

Beatrice act 3:
has low volume (82) and some background hum as well.
00:14 - repeat "I don't know. That is what I wanted.. I don't know. That is what I wanted to know."
4:32 - repeat "I came here, Mr Rowan, so early because... to show you this... Robert.. I came here, Mr Rowan, so early because... to show you this... Robert wrote it"

Otherwise great!

kathrinee · Post by **kathrinee** » June 25th, 2015, 6:48 am

PL note Robert act 1:
00:20 - I hear "I'm afraid they are not nice" instead of "mine"

Everything else is good!

Robert act 2 is PL OK! The beginning of the file does not say "Robert Hands, read by...", but I imagine that is ok, since it says in the first act. Please advise, Gloriana, if it needs to be added.

Good job!

beeber · Post by **beeber** » June 25th, 2015, 7:09 am

kathrinee wrote:PL note Robert act 1:
00:20 - I hear "I'm afraid they are not nice" instead of "mine"

Right. That appears to be an error in the text, corrected in other editions. (Note the posts by Elizabeth and myself back on June 16.)

gloriana · Post by **gloriana** » June 25th, 2015, 7:37 am

Thanks, Kathrine and Bruce- that line in act 1 is ok as is, and no second voice credit is needed.