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Post by philchenevert » November 12th, 2014, 8:52 am

TriciaG wrote:Would you please double check my section 7? I'd like to get it off my "see PL notes" column. ;) (See Sept 4 posts.)
I reviewed George's lines for all of act 2.4 and they are indeed in the MW link file. It has been spot checked and declared OK by me.
EDIT:I did not change the MW.
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Post by TriciaG » November 15th, 2014, 7:55 am

Thanks, Phil. I know David is busy, so I'll mark myself PL OK in the MW. If he needs anything from me, he knows where to find me. ;)
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Post by Tortilla » December 13th, 2014, 10:34 pm

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Post by aradlaw » December 27th, 2014, 2:27 pm

Tortilla wrote:There is the Second Sheriff!
Thank you, PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by Breeze » December 31st, 2014, 6:08 pm

I just notice the the part I recorded moths ago is still mark as 'See Pl notes'. I fixed that up almost straight away.
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Post by aradlaw » January 1st, 2015, 9:27 am

aradlaw wrote:Thank you Rapunzelina and Glen, both PL OK.

Bria, there is a stumble at 0:19 in the 3rd Warder "So generally bewailed of every one." [bee-wailed]
Breeze wrote:I just notice the the part I recorded months ago is still mark as 'See Pl notes'. I fixed that up almost straight away.
Sorry Bria, I must have missed that :oops:
That word 'bewailed' is still unclear, generally is is better to re-record the phrase or sentence (even a whole paragraph if necessary) to get the word correct or to keep the continuity flowing. :wink:
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Post by aradlaw » January 12th, 2015, 3:40 pm

We have one character missing in Sir Thomas More, that of Vice, only two (2) lines... :wink:

WIT.
This, Luggins, is your negligence;
Wanting Wit's beard brought things into dislike;
For otherwise the play had been all seen,
Where now some curious citizen disgraced it,
And discommending it, all is dismissed.

VICE. Fore God, a says true. But hear ye, sirs: 8 angels, ha! my lord would never give 8 angels more or less for 12d; other it should be 3l, 5l, or ten li.; there's 20s wanting, sure.

MORE. .... Wit, let thy fellows thank thee: twas well done;
Thou now deservest to match with Lady Wisdom.
[Exit More with Attendants.]

VICE. God a mercy, Wit!—Sir, you had a master Sir Thomas More more; but now we shall have more.
:help:
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Post by TriciaG » January 12th, 2015, 3:49 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/wildemoose/sirthomasmore_vce.mp3

Not sure if I got it all correct intonationally - I know I spelled "Vice" wrong in the file name. :roll:

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Post by aradlaw » January 22nd, 2015, 6:24 am

aradlaw wrote:
aradlaw wrote:Thank you Rapunzelina and Glen, both PL OK.

Bria, there is a stumble at 0:19 in the 3rd Warder "So generally bewailed of every one." [bee-wailed]
Breeze wrote:I just notice the the part I recorded months ago is still mark as 'See Pl notes'. I fixed that up almost straight away.
Sorry Bria, I must have missed that :oops:
That word 'bewailed' is still unclear, generally is is better to re-record the phrase or sentence (even a whole paragraph if necessary) to get the word correct or to keep the continuity flowing. :wink:
Happy New Year. :D
Bria, that 3rd Warder must be jinxed ! There is a line missing after the stage direction following your last line (which I missed when PLing). :oops:
THIRD WARDER.
I think, the poor will bury him in tears:
I never heard a man, since I was born,
So generally bewailed of every one.

[Enter a Poor Woman.]

What means this woman?—Whether doost thou press?

FIRST WARDER....
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Post by Breeze » January 22nd, 2015, 9:50 pm

Here's the Third Warder. All new, probably doesn't sound anything like the other one.
https://librivox.org/uploads/wildemoose/sirthomasmore_thirdwarder_5.mp3
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Post by aradlaw » January 23rd, 2015, 8:24 am

Great! thanks Bria.
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Post by aradlaw » February 4th, 2015, 4:25 pm

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Post by silverquill » February 4th, 2015, 4:47 pm

Okay, here is that missing line:



https://librivox.org/uploads/wildemoose/sirthomasmore_more_misinglines.mp3
00:10

It will be nice to see this one wrapped up!
Thanks for taking it one, David.
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Post by alanmapstone » February 5th, 2015, 12:04 am

Hi David

I notice that the part of Lifter is still marked See PL notes. I uploaded an amended version of this some time ago, see p.17.
I only mention this because I would not want the editor to think he is still waiting for the missing line.
Thanks for finishing up this project.
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Post by aradlaw » February 5th, 2015, 8:00 pm

Thank you for that missing line Larry. :thumbs:

Sorry for not responding to your edits Alan (or updating the MW :oops: ), they have been edited into Act 1, just waiting for a couple of ALL lines to finish Act 1.
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