COMPLETEThe Colored Patriots of the American Revolution - ck

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lubee930
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Hi, progressingamerica. I listened late last night (and also spot-checked 19)--just noted one thing.

Section 19: PL OK
Section 20: PL OK
Section 21:
--At ~19:32 (text 213, pdf 226) the text shows "...and pathos from the agony of Gethsemane and the sufferings of Calvary"--but I hear you say "...and pathos from the agony of Gethsemane and the sufferings of Calgary" :hmm:


Also, I noticed that in several different places you substituted the words "mathematical/mathematician" for the actual words in the text of "arithmetical/arithmetician": at ~6:26 (text 205, pdf 218), at ~7:54 and ~7:58 (text 206, pdf 219). I don't know that it changes the meaning hugely, but I'm wondering if it would be important to you to adhere to the historical text? I thought that I would mention it since it occurred in three different places.

Very nice readings as usual, progressingamerica--thank you! :)
Kind regards,
Lucretia
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Hi, progressingamerica--just one quick fix for you.

Section 22:
--At ~22:05 (bottom of p. 226 in the text) there is a repeat "...under the direction of one of their number, named Mad--their number, named Madison Washington..."

Such interesting, little-known pieces of history. (And you have great sound, by the way.) :)
Kind regards,
Lucretia
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(21)

You're right, it did sound like I said Calgary. It should be more clear now.

Also, with the arithmetician thing, I spent a few days practicing before re-recording. Let me know if all is well.

(22)

The repeat should be gone.

Yes, it is a shame that all of this has been forgotten to time.
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progressingamerica wrote:(21)
You're right, it did sound like I said Calgary. It should be more clear now.
Also, with the arithmetician thing, I spent a few days practicing before re-recording. Let me know if all is well.
(22)
The repeat should be gone.
Yes, it is a shame that all of this has been forgotten to time.
Excellent on all--thank you! :thumbs:

Section 21: PL OK
Section 22: PL OK
Section 23: PL OK

(We're on the top edge of acceptable range for Section 23 at 92.1 dB, so try not to creep up any louder-- :) )
Kind regards,
Lucretia
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I should have the next section done soon. (South Carolina)
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https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/coloredpatriots1776_24_nell.mp3

Also, I re-uploaded 23 after lowering the volume. Should be better.
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progressingamerica wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/coloredpatriots1776_24_nell.mp3
Also, I re-uploaded 23 after lowering the volume. Should be better.
Thank you for both, progressingamerica. I listened late last night--all good! :)

Section 24: PL OK
Kind regards,
Lucretia
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progressingamerica wrote:https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/coloredpatriots1776_25_nell.mp3
I have the next one mostly finished as well.
Thank you, progressingamerica--

Section 25: PL OK

(Again the volume is a little high at 91.7 dB, so don't get any louder on your next, please. :) )
Kind regards,
Lucretia
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lubee930
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Hi, progressingamerica--

Section 26:
--There is no outro on the track. Could you please add the "End of Chapter 15" outro at the end?

Volume good on both tracks--thank you! :thumbs:
Kind regards,
Lucretia
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Very nice, progressingamerica--thank you! :)

Section 26: PL OK
Section 27: PL OK
Kind regards,
Lucretia
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