COMPLETE The Desire of Ages by Ellen White - kd
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Chapter 76 is PL OK now.
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Chapter 77 only has a few edits needed for such a long chapter!
at 4:30, I hear "but it was not lawful" instead of "but it is not lawful"
at 9:13, I hear "then I should not" instead of "that I should not"
at 15:45, I hear "power to release him or to" instead of "power to release or to"
at 36:55, I hear "afterwards" instead of "afterward"
at 38:00, I hear "accepted him whom" instead of "accepted him who"
at 4:30, I hear "but it was not lawful" instead of "but it is not lawful"
at 9:13, I hear "then I should not" instead of "that I should not"
at 15:45, I hear "power to release him or to" instead of "power to release or to"
at 36:55, I hear "afterwards" instead of "afterward"
at 38:00, I hear "accepted him whom" instead of "accepted him who"
Arlene
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<Chapter 78> uploaded.
Will get those fixes done on 77.
Will get those fixes done on 77.
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Just a couple (maybe three) edits needed to Chapter 78:
at 3:59, I think I hear "The wonder at the hatred" instead of "They wonder at the hatred". You might decide I'm wrong, and it was just a fast word.
at 6:10, I hear "When Christ rose into" instead of "When Christ rode into" -- hurrying the story along a little?
at 18:06, I hear "the due rewards" instead of "the due reward"
at 3:59, I think I hear "The wonder at the hatred" instead of "They wonder at the hatred". You might decide I'm wrong, and it was just a fast word.
at 6:10, I hear "When Christ rose into" instead of "When Christ rode into" -- hurrying the story along a little?
at 18:06, I hear "the due rewards" instead of "the due reward"
Arlene
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Every day is a new adventure!
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I hate bronchitis. Knocked me out for 2 months this year, continual hacking cough that made reading pretty much impossible.
BUT, doing much better now, and back to work!
Chapter 78 corrections made.
BUT, doing much better now, and back to work!
Chapter 78 corrections made.
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Chapter 78 is PL OK. (If you read a previous version of this post, ignore the part about the double upload of Chapter 78. Brain skip.)
I hear three things differently than I read them for Chapter 79:
At 1:46, I hear "as easy as one can cast" instead of "as easily as one can cast"
At 15:29, I hear "the result of their own choice" instead of "the results of their own choice"
At 16:57, I hear "comprehended the result of the sacrifice" instead of "comprehended the results of the sacrifice"
I hear three things differently than I read them for Chapter 79:
At 1:46, I hear "as easy as one can cast" instead of "as easily as one can cast"
At 15:29, I hear "the result of their own choice" instead of "the results of their own choice"
At 16:57, I hear "comprehended the result of the sacrifice" instead of "comprehended the results of the sacrifice"
Arlene
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Chapter 80 uploaded.
I'll get those patches done to 79
I'll get those patches done to 79
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Chapter 80 only has 3 things:
At 12:46, I hear "This" instead of "That"
At 18:47, there is a repeat starting "but during the time..." It sounds like a correction, with the second one being correct.
At 19:11, I hear "suffering" instead of "sufferings"
I'll go check out the corrections for Chapter 79. I don't see that you have yet made corrections to Chapter 77. Did you upload them, and I'm just overlooking the message?
At 12:46, I hear "This" instead of "That"
At 18:47, there is a repeat starting "but during the time..." It sounds like a correction, with the second one being correct.
At 19:11, I hear "suffering" instead of "sufferings"
I'll go check out the corrections for Chapter 79. I don't see that you have yet made corrections to Chapter 77. Did you upload them, and I'm just overlooking the message?
Arlene
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Chapter 79 is PL OK.
Arlene
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You are absolutely right. I didn't get those 79 fixes done.
So, <done now>
I have 81 recorded, will have initial edit done soon hopefully.
So, <done now>
I have 81 recorded, will have initial edit done soon hopefully.
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Fixes to 77 sound good. Marked PL OK.
Arlene
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Chapter 81 Uploaded and ready for proof listening.
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For Chapter 80:
at 1:09 I hear "become" instead of "became"
at 1:24 I hear an extra "a" in "face of mortal"
at 5:28 I hear an extra "of" in "tell no one the things"
at 5:55 I hear "sentries" instead of "sentinels"
at 10:41 I think I hear "formed" instead of "performed", but it might just be clipped -- you'll have to see what you think
Alvarado, Texas is repeated at the end
at 1:09 I hear "become" instead of "became"
at 1:24 I hear an extra "a" in "face of mortal"
at 5:28 I hear an extra "of" in "tell no one the things"
at 5:55 I hear "sentries" instead of "sentinels"
at 10:41 I think I hear "formed" instead of "performed", but it might just be clipped -- you'll have to see what you think
Alvarado, Texas is repeated at the end
Arlene
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Every day is a new adventure!
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Every day is a new adventure!