[COMPLETE] The Diamond Lens with Other Stories by Fitz-James O'Brien - dc

Post by **brownrottger** » April 9th, 2024, 9:45 am

Section 4 is PL ok. Creepy and sad.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » April 9th, 2024, 6:32 pm

Section 5 is up!

Post by **brownrottger** » April 10th, 2024, 7:06 am

Section 5 is PL ok.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » April 10th, 2024, 3:39 pm

Section 6 is up!

Post by **brownrottger** » April 11th, 2024, 6:38 am

Section 6 is PL ok.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » April 11th, 2024, 3:08 pm

7 & 8 are up!

Post by **brownrottger** » April 11th, 2024, 7:18 pm

Section 7
19:12 repeat "and"
19:57 repeat "I am not constitutionally nervous, and had never been too long accustomed"
30:21 delete strange noise

Post by **brownrottger** » April 12th, 2024, 6:15 am

Section 8 is PL ok.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » April 12th, 2024, 2:04 pm

brownrottger wrote: ↑April 11th, 2024, 7:18 pm Section 7
19:12 repeat "and"
19:57 repeat "I am not constitutionally nervous, and had never been too long accustomed"
30:21 delete strange noise

Fixed!

Also 9 and 10 are up.

Btw, it was really hard for me not to laugh at the big reveal in section 9...

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » April 13th, 2024, 1:55 pm

And there's section 11!

Post by **brownrottger** » April 13th, 2024, 3:12 pm

Section 7 and 9 are PL ok. What happened to his child??

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » April 13th, 2024, 4:36 pm

brownrottger wrote: ↑April 13th, 2024, 3:12 pm Section 7 and 9 are PL ok. What happened to his child??

I guess he kicked them to the curb because the mom's Mormon?

Post by **brownrottger** » April 13th, 2024, 4:49 pm

Sections 10 and 11 are PL ok.

flavo5000 · Post by **flavo5000** » April 14th, 2024, 12:36 pm

Section 12 is up!

Post by **brownrottger** » April 15th, 2024, 10:21 am

Section 12:
43:54 remove word not in text "had"
should be "who betrayed her trust" I heard "who had betrayed her trust". The latter makes it sound like the protege betrayed the plagiarist's trust,