mleigh wrote: ↑April 16th, 2024, 5:52 pm
Section 1 is PL OK. Noticed you didn't read the list of all the committee members. It was read in earlier issues.
Sections 13, 17, and 18 are PL OK.
Section 19 just needs 1 change. I wouldn't mark it except that it is the title of the section.
0:27 should be "race" not "racial" in "race prejudice in the orient"
This last section was really interesting. Such a wise man. It was an impressive piece.
Thanks,
M
Well, I couldn't remember if I had included the whole committee or not. I started to record them, then got stuck. But, I'll review this and maybe add them later. I'll let you know.
Good catch on Section 19 which I've corrected and uploaded.
Thanks so much for the good PL on this and the rest of the project.
mleigh wrote: ↑April 16th, 2024, 5:52 pm
Section 1 is PL OK. Noticed you didn't read the list of all the committee members. It was read in earlier issues.
Sections 13, 17, and 18 are PL OK.
Section 19 just needs 1 change. I wouldn't mark it except that it is the title of the section.
0:27 should be "race" not "racial" in "race prejudice in the orient"
This last section was really interesting. Such a wise man. It was an impressive piece.
Thanks,
M
Well, I couldn't remember if I had included the whole committee or not. I started to record them, then got stuck. But, I'll review this and maybe add them later. I'll let you know.
Good catch on Section 19 which I've corrected and uploaded.
Thanks so much for the good PL on this and the rest of the project.
The silence at the start of section 2 is on the short side. Please add about 0.5 seconds so that the total silence is between 0.5 and 1 second of silence.
Sections 3 and 4 are PL OK, the silence is a little short on these, just keep an eye out for those beginning and ending silences.
