OPEN[PLAY]Mercator by Plautus - thw

[Algy Pug]

Here are the lines for Demipho:

Act 2 - 16:39
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_2.mp3

Act 3 - 2:53
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_3.mp3

Act 5 - 3:16
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_5.mp3

Cheers

[adrianstephens]

Well, he's a stumbly sort of guy sometimes. :wink:
But, I've tightened that up a bit more to be a little less bumbling.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_lysimachus_4.mp3

Thanks again!

Thank you Larry. PL OK!

[adrianstephens]

Here are the lines for Demipho:

Act 2 - 16:39
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_2.mp3

Act 3 - 2:53
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_3.mp3

Act 5 - 3:16
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_5.mp3

Cheers

Hello Algy Pug. Thank you, this was read with accuracy and passion.
You do a convincing old lecher, no insult intended.

PL Notes
Act 2
I Note that you have inserted vocal labels for scene changes e.g. "scene 2" at 3:46.
I don't imagine these will confuse the editor, so I won't remark on them further. Todd,
if my assumption is wrong, please say so.
15s "this very night" should be "this very last night"
5:44 missing line - the magic window asks you to read the translation in brackets "I am in love"
11:42 "according as people are scandalizing" s/b "according as persons are scandalizing"

Acts 2 and 3 are PL OK.
Best Regards,
Adrian

[ToddHW]

I do prefer not to have the "scene 2" etc comments in files - I do the rough cut assembly visually by counting number of lines to transfer and extra comments mess up the count.

But this will be fine this time since I'm alerted that these extras are in this file.

Thanks, Todd

[Algy Pug]

Lines for Demipho Act 2 corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_2.mp3
16:35

Cheers

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[ToddHW]

A Cook is in the MW ready for PL.

Thanks, Todd

[AgnesRobert]

peristrata

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_peristrata_4.mp3 (7:09)

[adrianstephens]

Lines for Demipho Act 2 corrected and reuploaded:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_2.mp3
16:35

Cheers

PL Notes,
15s " this last very night " sbould be " I, this very last night " - i.e. you dropped the "I" and the remaining words are all there, but not in the right order.
5:44 missing line - the magic window asks you to read the translation in brackets "I am in love"

Regards,
Adrian

[adrianstephens]

A Cook is in the MW ready for PL.

Thanks, Todd

Thank you, Todd.
PL Notes

(optional) at 27s I hear "he estumes that as food" should be "he esteems that as food"
I'm mark as PL OK.

Regards,
Adrian

[adrianstephens]

peristrata

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_peristrata_4.mp3 (7:09)

Thank you AgnesRobert. Nicely read.
PL Notes
At 32s "her they do obey, to her they pay regard" should be " her do they obey ; to her, do they pay regard" - word order and missing "do"

Regards,
Adrian

[Algy Pug]

Act 2 for Demipho - again:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_2.mp3
16:39

Cheers

[adrianstephens]

Act 2 for Demipho - again:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mercatorthemerchant_demipho_2.mp3
16:39

Cheers

Thank you, Algy Pug.
PL OK!

[ToddHW]

A Cook is in the MW ready for PL.

Thanks, Todd

Thank you, Todd.
PL Notes

(optional) at 27s I hear "he estumes that as food" should be "he esteems that as food"
I'm mark as PL OK.

Regards,
Adrian

Hmm. Maybe I was thinking about legumes... Anyway, it is now "esteems", ready for Spot PL.

Thanks, Todd

[adrianstephens]

Hmm. Maybe I was thinking about legumes... Anyway, it is now "esteems", ready for Spot PL.

Thanks, Todd

Thank you.
PL OK, Todd.
Regards,
Adrian