~OPEN [DR] Stand By For Mars! - thw

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Charlie Wolcheck has been promoted to Lieutenant Charlie Wolcheck in the credits. That matches his rank as mentioned in chapter 3.

Note to all - when you spot an error in the way I broke up the parts please let me know. I know they are in there.
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Congratulations, you space ape!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_07.mp3 [9:17]
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JHedrick wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 9:29 am Congratulations, you space ape!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_07.mp3 [9:17]
At ~6:07 "Roger" is upcut; I'm hearing "oger" - I bet I can grab another Roger from elsewhere in this chapter and splice it in. (Test test test - ah, it's fine now.) PL OK.

It must be nice to get a spaceship after what - three months of training. However - the next chapter brings more turmoil.
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If it's still open, i could grab Al James.
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abratch wrote: ↑April 7th, 2024, 8:05 am If it's still open, i could grab Al James.
Sure thing. You've got Al James - chapters 11, 12 and 14.
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Narrator 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_08.mp3 [8:51]

What is the back story?
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JHedrick wrote: ↑April 9th, 2024, 7:31 am Narrator 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_08.mp3 [8:51]

What is the back story?
Chapter 8 narration is PL OK. We are getting more and more green in the Magic Window.

The listeners will have to wait a bit longer for Roger's story.

The noisy part of some repair here is nearly over, so soon I'll be able to start in on Astro's lines.
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Narrator 9:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_09.mp3 [16:14]

Oh Boy! I bet it has that new car smell! :rocket:
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JHedrick wrote: ↑April 11th, 2024, 6:08 am Narrator 9:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_09.mp3 [16:14]
Oh Boy! I bet it has that new car smell! :rocket:
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At ~4:29 I hear "Strong's voice boomed out as he climbed through the control-deck hatch." The text reads "Strong's voice boomed out as he climbed up through the control-deck hatch."

At ~8:01 I hear "He checked the electronic timing device in front of him that ticked off the seconds" The text reads "He checked the electric timing device in front of him that ticked off the seconds"

At ~13:01 I hear "The Solar Guard took Tom's place in the command pilot's chair." The text reads "The Solar Guard officer took Tom's place in the command pilot's chair."
JHedrick wrote: ↑April 11th, 2024, 6:08 am Oh Boy! I bet it has that new car smell!
After a few flights they can buy one of those scented pine trees to dangle from the teleceiver screen.
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Chapter 9 corrections:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_09.mp3 [16:14]

:evergreen_tree: :evergreen_tree: :evergreen_tree:
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JHedrick wrote: ↑April 11th, 2024, 12:04 pm Chapter 9 corrections:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_09.mp3 [16:14]

:evergreen_tree: :evergreen_tree: :evergreen_tree:
You're so fast! Spot check is PL OK.
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Hi Rich,

I think "How many jet boats do you have?" in chapter 14, page 1 might belong to Al James.
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JHedrick wrote: ↑April 11th, 2024, 3:00 pm Hi Rich,

I think "How many jet boats do you have?" in chapter 14, page 1 might belong to Al James.
I agree. It will be fixed in a moment.
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Chapter 10 narrator:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_narration_10.mp3 [26:53]
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Doctor Joan Dale, Chapter 2, reporting for duty! https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/standbyformars_dale_02.mp3 (3:34)

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