Hi John - you're really moving along! I have a number of fixes for you to manage on this one, as follows:
--After Chapter title: “Part I” not read
--at 5:11
Sort of a “blip” in the delivery, as if an edit was made and not smoothly finished.
--at 12:32
Dropped “…de sa splendeur..” from the end of French paragraph
--at 16:19
“Months” seems cut off, as if an edit were done and it got caught in a cut.
--at 17:06
Dropped “which might so easily have been done by cancelling a couple of dull columns and substituting a circumstantial narrative ... “
--at 30:12
Dropped “men” from “calling great men…”
Betsy
