OPEN[Play]Don Caesar de Bazan by D'Ernnery and Dumanoir - thw

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Hi Kelly,
PL Okay for the Marchioness, both acts.
Thank you,
Lora
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Isn't the Officer also in act 1?
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Inkell wrote: March 15th, 2024, 6:03 pm Isn't the Officer also in act 1?
Yes, I think you're right.
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ktaylor07 wrote: March 16th, 2024, 5:52 am
Inkell wrote: March 15th, 2024, 6:03 pm Isn't the Officer also in act 1?
Yes, I think you're right.
If I do those three roles, should I also do that then? Or just the two and ignore the soldiers' line or what?
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Inkell wrote: March 16th, 2024, 5:58 am
ktaylor07 wrote: March 16th, 2024, 5:52 am
Inkell wrote: March 15th, 2024, 6:03 pm Isn't the Officer also in act 1?
Yes, I think you're right.
If I do those three roles, should I also do that then? Or just the two and ignore the soldiers' line or what?
Okay - Actually, Todd is already signed up to take care of that officer's line at the end of Act one -- I forgot about that. If you sign up for the role of "Soldier" -- I would like for you to read all the Soldier's chorus lines in Act I, 2nd cavalier's one line in Act II, and the "Officers" one line in Act III.
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ktaylor07 wrote: March 16th, 2024, 7:11 am Okay - Actually, Todd is already signed up to take care of that officer's line at the end of Act one -- I forgot about that. If you sign up for the role of "Soldier" -- I would like for you to read all the Soldier's chorus lines in Act I, 2nd cavalier's one line in Act II, and the "Officers" one line in Act III.
Yes I would like to do that and that's what I thought it meant from the MW which was why I was confused when I saw the officer line in act 1 so wondered if I was mistaken, I could only see one soldiers' line otherwise in act 1
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Inkell wrote: March 16th, 2024, 8:19 am
ktaylor07 wrote: March 16th, 2024, 7:11 am Okay - Actually, Todd is already signed up to take care of that officer's line at the end of Act one -- I forgot about that. If you sign up for the role of "Soldier" -- I would like for you to read all the Soldier's chorus lines in Act I, 2nd cavalier's one line in Act II, and the "Officers" one line in Act III.
Yes I would like to do that and that's what I thought it meant from the MW which was why I was confused when I saw the officer line in act 1 so wondered if I was mistaken, I could only see one soldiers' line otherwise in act 1
Okay - Great! I'll sign you up for Soldier 2. :D

Yes, I thought I was being very clever rolling the "one-liner" soldier parts into package deals -- but I missed that line at the end of Act I. :?
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Thank you, sir! :D
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Hello Algy,

PL Okay for the Marquis, both acts.
Many thanks,

Lora
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ADKreader1122 wrote: March 15th, 2024, 4:17 pm Hello Adrian,
So good to hear your voice again!
PL Okay for Don Jose, Act 1.
In Act 2 at :13 please change "Yes: you know how she..." to "Yes: how well she..."
Act 2 at :26 please omit the first "her" in "...the one for which {her} nature intended her."
Act 2 at 8:57 remove the repetition of the phrase "fire upon him."

Act 3 at the very end, please add one more line after "Hush!" It is, "Your husband, madam."

Thanks,
Lora
Thank you, Lora.
Here are the corrections: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_donjose_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_donjose_3.mp3
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Perfect, Adrian--thank you! PL Okay for both acts.

L.
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Here you go, and I did manage to find an extra line for the soldiers in act 1-

2nd Soldier: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_2ndsoldier_1.mp3 (0 mins, 51 secs)
2nd Cavalier: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_2ndcavalier_2.mp3 (0 mins, 15 secs)
2nd Officer: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_2ndofficer_3.mp3 (0 mins, 15 secs)
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Inkell wrote: March 18th, 2024, 2:36 pm Here you go, and I did manage to find an extra line for the soldiers in act 1-

2nd Soldier: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_2ndsoldier_1.mp3 (0 mins, 51 secs)
2nd Cavalier: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_2ndcavalier_2.mp3 (0 mins, 15 secs)
2nd Officer: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_2ndofficer_3.mp3 (0 mins, 15 secs)
Thanks! :D
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Hi Inkell,
The soldier/officer/cavalier parts for acts 2 and 3 are PL Okay. Please check act 1 part at :31--the word "to" should be changed to "is" in "...mortal's hour is come..."

Thanks,
Lora
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