OPEN[Play]Don Caesar de Bazan by D'Ernnery and Dumanoir - thw

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ADKreader1122 wrote: March 19th, 2024, 9:01 am Hi Inkell,
The soldier/officer/cavalier parts for acts 2 and 3 are PL Okay. Please check act 1 part at :31--the word "to" should be changed to "is" in "...mortal's hour is come..."

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Thank you. How about now?

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_2ndsoldier_1.mp3
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Great-thank you. PL Okay now, Inkell.

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Thank you! :D
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Hello Alan,
PL Okay for the Judge, Act 1.
Thank you,
Lora
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Here are stage directions for Act 1. I didn't do a dramatis personae, but can if you like. The are a few places where I was uncertain of lines to include, like "Shouts without" and then followed by Viva, etc. which aren't labeled for any character. Easy enough to cut if not needed. I do have the other two acts recorded, but thought I should get feedback on this one in case there are any major things I need to change. Lots, of stage directions, but not quite as bad as Pinero. :lol:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/doncaesardebazan_stage_1.mp3 17:10
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Hi David,
PL Okay for the servant, Act 2.

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Lora
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Hello Larry,
You did a fine job with the stage directions for Act 1. There was lots to capture!
Three small notes:
--at 11:12 please add "Don Jose" before {Goes up to L.D.}
--at 12:26 possibly add "Chorus of Soldiers" before the song as you did for the Drinking Song? I'll leave that to you and Kelly to determine.
--at 13:36 after {Lopez Exits} please add "The judge...with great respect."

Thank you,
Lora
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silverquill wrote: March 26th, 2024, 2:20 pm Here are stage directions for Act 1. I didn't do a dramatis personae, but can if you like. The are a few places where I was uncertain of lines to include, like "Shouts without" and then followed by Viva, etc. which aren't labeled for any character. Easy enough to cut if not needed. I do have the other two acts recorded, but thought I should get feedback on this one in case there are any major things I need to change. Lots, of stage directions, but not quite as bad as Pinero. :lol:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/doncaesardebazan_stage_1.mp3 17:10
Please add a Dramatis Personae, if you don't mind. :)
Yes, this is a lot of stage directions for this era! It might be because there was so much music in this play? And yes, when in doubt, include the line. I can cut if I don't need it.
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ADKreader1122 wrote: March 26th, 2024, 5:02 pm Hello Larry,
You did a fine job with the stage directions for Act 1. There was lots to capture!
Three small notes:
--at 11:12 please add "Don Jose" before {Goes up to L.D.}
--at 12:26 possibly add "Chorus of Soldiers" before the song as you did for the Drinking Song? I'll leave that to you and Kelly to determine.
--at 13:36 after {Lopez Exits} please add "The judge...with great respect."

Thank you,
Lora
Yes, I'd like "Chorus of Soldiers" again.
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ToddHW wrote: March 30th, 2024, 10:14 am Here are 1st Soldiers (Act 1 - includes an officer line), 1st Cavaliers (Act 2), and 1st Officers (Act 3).

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_1stsoldier_1.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_1stcavalier_2.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncaesardebazan_1stoffiers_3.mp3

Thanks, Todd
Wonderful! Thanks!
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Hi Todd,
PL Okay, all acts, for the various officers/cavaliers.

Thanks,
Lora
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