COMPLETE [Weekly Poetry] Abel Melveny by Edgar Lee Masters - dl

StaceyM2022 · Post by **StaceyM2022** » March 13th, 2024, 1:34 pm

Hello,

Here is my section 1:02

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_sm_128kb.mp3

Thanks,
Stacey

brucek · Post by **brucek** » March 13th, 2024, 1:38 pm

And here's mine at 1:17

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_bk_128kb.mp3

~~~~~
Bruce.

Post by **aradlaw** » March 13th, 2024, 2:01 pm

Thank you Stacey, Bruce and Melissa.

Fig1800 · Post by **Fig1800** » March 13th, 2024, 2:05 pm

Here's my recording

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_mt_128kb.mp3
1.23

Thanks!
Melissa

Post by **aradlaw** » March 13th, 2024, 2:12 pm

Here is my reading...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_dl_128kb.mp3
1:15

RevBro1 · Post by **RevBro1** » March 13th, 2024, 5:59 pm

David:

Here's my contribution:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_reb_128kb.mp3

1:19

Rob E. Brown

Post by **aradlaw** » March 13th, 2024, 6:39 pm

Thank you Rob.

brucek · Post by **brucek** » March 14th, 2024, 5:29 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑March 13th, 2024, 2:12 pm Here is my reading...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_dl_128kb.mp3
1:15

Hi David,

Good reading, but there is one small thing I should mention because it does change the intent slightly.

At 0:48 I'm not hearing "I" in the line: "As things turned out, and I never ran."

Thanks,
Bruce.

Post by **aradlaw** » March 15th, 2024, 7:24 am

Thank you Bruce, take 2...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_dl_128kb.mp3

RedPandaPages · Post by **RedPandaPages** » March 15th, 2024, 10:09 am

Here is my version of this week's poem. Let me know if I need to make any edits or adjustments.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmalveny_masters_cam_128kb.mp3

Duration: 01:08.91

brucek · Post by **brucek** » March 15th, 2024, 10:37 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑March 15th, 2024, 7:24 am Thank you Bruce, take 2...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_dl_128kb.mp3

PL OK now, David.

Thanks,
Bruce.

NMartin · Post by **NMartin** » March 15th, 2024, 11:16 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_nam_128kb.mp3

1:19

To Note (as this is my first recording): I would like to be listed as Nathan Martin.

Thank you much!

Post by **aradlaw** » March 15th, 2024, 12:47 pm

NMartin wrote: ↑March 15th, 2024, 11:16 am https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_nam_128kb.mp3

1:19

To Note (as this is my first recording): I would like to be listed as Nathan Martin.

Thank you much!

Welcome to LibriVox Nathan

good first reading. The silences are a little off though...

Leave ½ to 1 second of silence at the beginning.
Leave 5 seconds of silence at the end.

Could you fix those and upload a new file (same filename), thanks.

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Post by **aradlaw** » March 15th, 2024, 12:48 pm

Thank you Cassandra.

and thanks for the spot PL Bruce.

NMartin · Post by **NMartin** » March 15th, 2024, 1:04 pm

aradlaw wrote: ↑March 15th, 2024, 12:47 pm

Could you fix those and upload a new file (same filename), thanks.

*You can view your brand new LV Catalog page by clicking your forum name in the Magic Window in the opening post.

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https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/abelmelveny_masters_nam_128kb.mp3

There you go! Thank you for the tips!