TheBanjo wrote: ↑March 24th, 2024, 12:27 am
Sunrise2020 wrote: ↑March 22nd, 2024, 6:32 pm
In Section 12 please check at about minute 3:22 where you repeated the sentence starting with “What are you doing with the dog…”. The rest of the section is fine.
Hi Susanne, you're quite right to be suggesting I check this passage, for there is indeed a repetition.
In this case, however, the repetition is part of the original text, which reads, at this point:
‘What are you doing with the dog, the fairy dog?’ said a man, who at this time likewise cleared the dyke at a bound.
He was a very tall man, rather well dressed as it should seem; his garments, however, were, like my own, so covered with snow that I could scarcely discern their quality.
‘What are ye doing with the dog of peace?’
‘I wish he would show himself one,’ said I,,,
Unusual let-off for yours truly, this time! I've set the status to PL OK.
Sorry Peter, can’t let you off the hook that easily. You repeated the following two sentences before we get to the dog of peace:
What are you doing with the dog, the fairy dog?’ said a man, who at this time likewise cleared the dyke at a bound.
He was a very tall man, rather well dressed as it should seem; his garments, however, were, like my own, so covered with snow that I could scarcely discern their quality.
Kindly have another listen.