COMPLETE [Weekly Poetry] The Apartment House by Joyce Kilmer - dl

Fig1800 · Post by **Fig1800** » March 6th, 2024, 11:09 am

here is my version. track length 1:12

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_mt_128kb.mp3

nswanson · Post by **nswanson** » March 6th, 2024, 1:11 pm

Hi, here is my reading:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_ns_128kb.mp3
Length: 1:05

Thanks!
Ny

Post by **aradlaw** » March 6th, 2024, 7:27 pm

NFortier wrote: ↑March 6th, 2024, 9:40 am Good morning! This is my first ever reading. Length 1:10. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Natalie Fortier
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartment_house_kilmer_ncf_128kb.mp3

Welcome to LibriVox Natalie

good first reading.
*I corrected your filename (it is best to copy/paste the sample from the opening post, inserting your initials of course.

**Please let me know under what name you would like to appear in the LV catalog; if you have one, we can also put your personal URL link on your catalog page.
You can view your brand new LV Catalog page by clicking your forum name in the Magic Window.

Post by **aradlaw** » March 6th, 2024, 7:30 pm

Thanks for the PL Garth.

Thank you for your readings, Ny and Melissa.

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » March 7th, 2024, 7:22 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_aps_128kb.mp3 1:10

NFortier · Post by **NFortier** » March 7th, 2024, 7:23 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑March 6th, 2024, 7:27 pm
NFortier wrote: ↑March 6th, 2024, 9:40 am Good morning! This is my first ever reading. Length 1:10. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Natalie Fortier
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartment_house_kilmer_ncf_128kb.mp3
Welcome to LibriVox Natalie good first reading.
*I corrected your filename (it is best to copy/paste the sample from the opening post, inserting your initials of course.

**Please let me know under what name you would like to appear in the LV catalog; if you have one, we can also put your personal URL link on your catalog page.
You can view your brand new LV Catalog page by clicking your forum name in the Magic Window.

Thank you! Please put it in the catalog under Natalie Fortier.

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » March 7th, 2024, 7:29 am

NFortier wrote: ↑March 6th, 2024, 9:40 am Good morning! This is my first ever reading. :) Length 1:10. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Natalie Fortier
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartment_house_kilmer_ncf_128kb.mp3

Dear Natalie,
This is a good recording. I love the way you find a word to pivot on, it takes the stress and pause and then the reading carries one.
I also love the way you vary the end of lines, running them together or stopping for a pause. This creates the underlying rhythm
that you hang your interpretation of the words on.

This is a simple poem, not given to great excesses. But your reading made it alive - which is all that the listener can ask for.

Regards,
Adrian Stephens

Post by **aradlaw** » March 7th, 2024, 7:39 am

Thank you for your reading Adrian.

*Natalie, your LibriVox catalog page has been updated.

Adrian, an excellent review to encourage our new reader Natalie Fortier, thanks for that.

voiceofdave · Post by **voiceofdave** » March 7th, 2024, 9:59 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_dc_128kb.mp3
1:06
Cheers

AmyS · Post by **AmyS** » March 7th, 2024, 11:52 am

Here's a version. List me as Emily Maynard. Thanks!

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_em_128kb_mp3.mp3

jramd · Post by **jramd** » March 7th, 2024, 12:43 pm

aradlaw wrote: ↑March 5th, 2024, 2:50 pm Welcome to Librivox Juliana good first reading. One comment - the volume is a bit too high at 95.8 dB. You should aim for your waveforms to peak near the 0.5 mark, like this:

You can check your volume using our Checker program - see info at http://wiki.librivox.org/index.php/Checker You will find the volume in decibels on the Information tab. For your information, we look for around 89 dB (87-91 is OK) (all the other tech specs are there also)
*Please let me know under what name you would like to appear in the LV catalog and if you have one, we can put your personal URL link on your catalog page too.
You can view your brand new LV Catalog page by clicking your forum name in the Magic Window.

David,
Thanks for your feedback. You can list my name as jramd - thanks!

Veggrower · Post by **Veggrower** » March 7th, 2024, 1:32 pm

Here's my version:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_gln_128kb.mp3 (1:18)

Thanks David,

Garth

NFortier · Post by **NFortier** » March 7th, 2024, 2:43 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑March 7th, 2024, 7:29 am
NFortier wrote: ↑March 6th, 2024, 9:40 am Good morning! This is my first ever reading. Length 1:10. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Natalie Fortier
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartment_house_kilmer_ncf_128kb.mp3
Dear Natalie,
This is a good recording. I love the way you find a word to pivot on, it takes the stress and pause and then the reading carries one.
I also love the way you vary the end of lines, running them together or stopping for a pause. This creates the underlying rhythm
that you hang your interpretation of the words on.

This is a simple poem, not given to great excesses. But your reading made it alive - which is all that the listener can ask for.

Regards,
Adrian Stephens

Thank you so much for your positive feedback, Adrian!

StaceyM2022 · Post by **StaceyM2022** » March 7th, 2024, 2:46 pm

Hi,

Here is mine. 57 seconds

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_sm_128kb.mp3

Thanks,
Stacey

Newgatenovelist · Post by **Newgatenovelist** » March 7th, 2024, 3:05 pm

Mine is 1.18 this week:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/apartmenthouse_kilmer_el0_128kb.mp3
Erin