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jennlea wrote: March 31st, 2024, 4:35 pm Here is Act 2 of Eboli:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_princesseboli_2.mp3
27:29
What a schemer, and very nicely read.

PL notes
2:30 "he knows little" should be "he little knows"
5:14 I think the parsing here is wrong and should be "and more, far more, e'en..."
9:51 "then did prince philip's son" should be "then did phillip's..."
21:46 "called in to revel" s/b "called to revel"

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Thanks, Todd. Regally read.

PL notes
(optional) 2:25 I hear "thy name is caluminy" should be "thy name is calumny" I don't know if this is USA/UK pronunciation difference.
(optional) 3:05 I hear "to assage" s/b "to assuage". Again I don't know if this is a correct USA pronunciation.
25:13 I hear "to some benign use" s/b "to some benignant use". I don't know this word, but that's wot's writ.

Best Regards,
Adrian
Fixes made. (Note that first one is actually at 2:15.) Never used these three words before in my life.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_king_3.mp3

Thanks, Todd
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Inkell wrote: March 2nd, 2024, 3:13 pm
Act 3: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_marquis_3.mp3 (14 mins, 30 secs)
Thank you, Inkell, Passionately read!

PL Notes
(optional) 8:35 I hear "the subjects-is ... the sovreigns-is greatness" should be pronounced "the subjects welfare and the sovreigns greatness"
11:03 I hear "one pen <pause> stroke now", should be "... pen-stroke ... " - a hyphenated single word
11:46 I hear "external" s/b "he conceals himself within His own eternal laws"
12:14 I hear "restore the prostate dignity" s/b "... prostrate..."

Regards,
Adrian
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Thanks Adrian
You have cleared the backlog in 2 days
Great Job :thumbs:
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adrianstephens wrote: April 5th, 2024, 1:58 am
Thanks, Todd. Regally read.

PL notes
(optional) 2:25 I hear "thy name is caluminy" should be "thy name is calumny" I don't know if this is USA/UK pronunciation difference.
(optional) 3:05 I hear "to assage" s/b "to assuage". Again I don't know if this is a correct USA pronunciation.
25:13 I hear "to some benign use" s/b "to some benignant use". I don't know this word, but that's wot's writ.

Best Regards,
Adrian
Fixes made. (Note that first one is actually at 2:15.) Never used these three words before in my life.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_king_3.mp3

Thanks, Todd
(Sorry - I originally edited your post rather than quoting it above.)
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alanmapstone wrote: March 11th, 2024, 12:20 am
GregGiordano wrote: March 10th, 2024, 4:26 pm Here are the lines for Carlos, Act Two -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_2.mp3
This is another large file (45:13).
Alan, since you indicated that you would not be PL-ing larger files for while, I am going to set this particular project aside and work on another play I am also working on. I'll come back to it in a bit to give you time to catch up or find another DPL.
Hi Greg
Thanks for this, it is Ready for PL!

This is going to be a long project so I quite understand that you may wish to prioritise other things.
Cheers!
Alan,

Now that Adrian is on board as DPL I will move this back to one of my two top priority projects!

Take care,

Greg
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adrianstephens wrote: April 5th, 2024, 2:33 am Thank you, Inkell, Passionately read!

PL Notes
(optional) 8:35 I hear "the subjects-is ... the sovreigns-is greatness" should be pronounced "the subjects welfare and the sovreigns greatness"
11:03 I hear "one pen <pause> stroke now", should be "... pen-stroke ... " - a hyphenated single word
11:46 I hear "external" s/b "he conceals himself within His own eternal laws"
12:14 I hear "restore the prostate dignity" s/b "... prostrate..."

Regards,
Adrian
Thank you, PL corrections are first on my to do list when I'm better
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ToddHW wrote: April 5th, 2024, 6:51 am
adrianstephens wrote: April 5th, 2024, 1:58 am
Thanks, Todd. Regally read.

PL notes
(optional) 2:25 I hear "thy name is caluminy" should be "thy name is calumny" I don't know if this is USA/UK pronunciation difference.
(optional) 3:05 I hear "to assage" s/b "to assuage". Again I don't know if this is a correct USA pronunciation.
25:13 I hear "to some benign use" s/b "to some benignant use". I don't know this word, but that's wot's writ.

Best Regards,
Adrian
Fixes made. (Note that first one is actually at 2:15.) Never used these three words before in my life.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_king_3.mp3

Thanks, Todd
(Sorry - I originally edited your post rather than quoting it above.)

Thank you, Todd. and PL OK!
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Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
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ToddHW wrote: April 5th, 2024, 6:51 am Fixes made. (Note that first one is actually at 2:15.) Never used these three words before in my life.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_king_3.mp3
King Philip is now completely PL OK! :thumbs:
Well Done Todd and Thanks Adrian
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Here is Act One of Don Carlos with the missed correction noted ready for Spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_1.mp3

Here is Act Two of Don Carlos with the requested corrections (not those marked 'optional') ready for Spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_2.mp3

Thank you!

Greg
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GregGiordano wrote: April 5th, 2024, 6:52 pm Here is Act One of Don Carlos with the missed correction noted ready for Spot PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_1.mp3
Here is Act Two of Don Carlos with the requested corrections (not those marked 'optional') ready for Spot PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_2.mp3
Thanks Greg, these are Ready for Spot PL!
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alanmapstone wrote: April 5th, 2024, 10:55 pm
GregGiordano wrote: April 5th, 2024, 6:52 pm Here is Act One of Don Carlos with the missed correction noted ready for Spot PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_1.mp3
Here is Act Two of Don Carlos with the requested corrections (not those marked 'optional') ready for Spot PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_2.mp3
Thanks Greg, these are Ready for Spot PL!
Thanks, Alan!
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GregGiordano wrote: April 5th, 2024, 6:52 pm Here is Act One of Don Carlos with the missed correction noted ready for Spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_1.mp3


Thank you!

Greg
Hello Greg,
Did you upload the right file? The latest upload still has the error.
now 18:49 I hear "yawning precipice's brine" s/b "...brink"
Regards,
Adrian
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