OPEN[Play] Don Carlos by Schiller - thw

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » April 6th, 2024, 5:32 am

GregGiordano wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 6:52 pm
Here is Act Two of Don Carlos with the requested corrections (not those marked 'optional') ready for Spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_2.mp3

Thank you!

Greg

Thank you, Greg. This is PL OK.

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » April 6th, 2024, 5:57 am

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 7:48 pm queen elizabeth

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_1.mp3 (18:58)

Thank you Agnes, very nicely read. I think you enjoyed the scene with Carlos.

PL Notes:
3:51 "please bring her" should be "pray bring her"
5:29 "can only venture this to the daughter of" s/b " ... venture this, this to ..."
13:40 "alas dear carlos" s/b "alas dear Charles"
15:24 "and waywardness, and pride,
The heart you lavish"
should be "and waywardness, and pride,
Attract you thus so madly to your mother!
The heart you lavish"
15:46 "fell strings of" s/b "fell stings of"

Regards,
Adrian

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » April 6th, 2024, 6:36 am

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 7:48 pm queen elizabeth

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_2.mp3 (0:23)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_4.mp3 (24:11)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_5.mp3 (2:21)

Act 2 is PL OK!

Act 4 PL notes:
at 1:10 missing line "Admit him then."
7:21-7:25 missed edit
7:42 "but he took only" should be "but he only took"
9:00 missing line "What then my——"
10:25 pronunciation "Aranjuez?" should be pronounced something like "a-ran-hweth"
(https://www.howtopronounce.com/spanish/aranjuez)
11:44 missed edit "tis a harder task"
16:20 I hear "each breath day alarms me" s/b "each breath to-day alarms me"
17:43 missed edit "that fright"

Act 5 PL notes:
0:15 "the mighty deed" should be "the might dead" - i.e. deceased
Regards,
Adrian

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » April 6th, 2024, 7:12 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 5:23 am
GregGiordano wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 6:52 pm Here is Act One of Don Carlos with the missed correction noted ready for Spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_1.mp3

Thank you!

Greg
Hello Greg,
Did you upload the right file? The latest upload still has the error.
now 18:49 I hear "yawning precipice's brine" s/b "...brink"
Regards,
Adrian

This is becoming tiresome, my friend!

Not you, me. I pride myself on making few errors. I know these two files were long and I did originally edit them late at night, still...well, I shall correct whatever happened and get this moving on.

Thank you,

Greg

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » April 6th, 2024, 7:22 am

GregGiordano wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 7:12 am
This is becoming tiresome, my friend! 😀 Not you, me. I pride myself on making few errors. I know these two files were long and I did originally edit them late at night, still...well, I shall correct whatever happened and get this moving on.

Thank you,

Greg

Don't be hard on yourself, Greg! You have a big part!

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 6th, 2024, 10:38 am

Thank you Agnes, Greg and Adrian.

Keep going Greg my friend, it is an enormous role

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » April 6th, 2024, 10:44 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 7:22 am
GregGiordano wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 7:12 am
This is becoming tiresome, my friend! Not you, me. I pride myself on making few errors. I know these two files were long and I did originally edit them late at night, still...well, I shall correct whatever happened and get this moving on.

Thank you,

Greg
Don't be hard on yourself, Greg! You have a big part!

Thanks, Adrian. I appreciate the encouragement!

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » April 6th, 2024, 10:45 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 10:38 am Thank you Agnes, Greg and Adrian.

Keep going Greg my friend, it is an enormous role

Thank you, Alan. You are always very kind!

Beeswaxcandle · Post by **Beeswaxcandle** » April 6th, 2024, 4:13 pm

Duke of Alva:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_1.mp3 00:27
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_2.mp3 08:26
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_3.mp3 06:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_4.mp3 04:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_5.mp3 06:11

AgnesRobert · Post by **AgnesRobert** » April 6th, 2024, 5:19 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 5:57 am
AgnesRobert wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 7:48 pm queen elizabeth

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_1.mp3 (18:58)
Thank you Agnes, very nicely read. I think you enjoyed the scene with Carlos.

PL Notes:
3:51 "please bring her" should be "pray bring her"
5:29 "can only venture this to the daughter of" s/b " ... venture this, this to ..."
13:40 "alas dear carlos" s/b "alas dear Charles"
15:24 "and waywardness, and pride,
The heart you lavish"
should be "and waywardness, and pride,
Attract you thus so madly to your mother!
The heart you lavish"
15:46 "fell strings of" s/b "fell stings of"

Regards,
Adrian

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_1.mp3 (edit i forgot time, here it is 19:02)
fixed except for the 13:40 because typos probably

by alanmapstone » March 4th, 2024, 1:13 am

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑March 3rd, 2024, 5:49 pm
I have noticed that I sometimes call Carlos by the name Charles. are these typos or not? the first instance is in act one, scene 5 a few pages into that act.
also my favorite typo I have noticed so far is in the stage directions where Dude of Alva is in one of the scenes

Hi Agnes
I think we will all need to use a bit of common sense with this text which full of typos.

Please always address Carlos as Carlos whatever the text says. This could be a nightmare to PL

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » April 6th, 2024, 6:02 pm

Okay, third time is a charm! Here is Act One of "Carlos" with the final correction definitely included!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_1.mp3

Alan & Adrian,

I do apologize for the "whine and cheese" festival I threw earlier. It has been a very tough week for a number of reasons. I just responded in a way I never do. I know you both said I did not need to apologize but I still felt you deserved better. As long as this part may be, it was my choice to claim it. We will get through!

Thank you both, again, for your kind encouragement.

Take care,

Greg

AgnesRobert · Post by **AgnesRobert** » April 6th, 2024, 6:06 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 6:36 am
AgnesRobert wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 7:48 pm queen elizabeth

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_2.mp3 (0:23)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_4.mp3 (24:11)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_5.mp3 (2:21)
Act 2 is PL OK!

Act 4 PL notes:
at 1:10 missing line "Admit him then."
7:21-7:25 missed edit
7:42 "but he took only" should be "but he only took"
9:00 missing line "What then my——"
10:25 pronunciation "Aranjuez?" should be pronounced something like "a-ran-hweth"
(https://www.howtopronounce.com/spanish/aranjuez)
11:44 missed edit "tis a harder task"
16:20 I hear "each breath day alarms me" s/b "each breath to-day alarms me"
17:43 missed edit "that fright"

Act 5 PL notes:
0:15 "the mighty deed" should be "the might dead" - i.e. deceased
Regards,
Adrian

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_4.mp3 (24:13)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_5.mp3 (2:23)

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 6th, 2024, 6:16 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 5:57 am
AgnesRobert wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 7:48 pm queen elizabeth
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_1.mp3 (18:58)
PL Notes:
13:40 "alas dear carlos" s/b "alas dear Charles"

Hi Adrian
Can you note the dialogue above between myself and Agnes. I think Carlos should always be addressed as Carlos.
This text is inconsistent in the use of English and Spanish names, but I would like the Spanish names to be used.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 6th, 2024, 7:53 pm

Beeswaxcandle wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 4:13 pm Duke of Alva:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_1.mp3 00:27
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_2.mp3 08:26
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_3.mp3 06:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_4.mp3 04:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_alva_5.mp3 06:11

All Ready for PL!
Thank you

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » April 6th, 2024, 10:52 pm

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 5:19 pm
adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 6th, 2024, 5:57 am
AgnesRobert wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 7:48 pm queen elizabeth

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_1.mp3 (18:58)
Thank you Agnes, very nicely read. I think you enjoyed the scene with Carlos.

PL Notes:
3:51 "please bring her" should be "pray bring her"
5:29 "can only venture this to the daughter of" s/b " ... venture this, this to ..."
13:40 "alas dear carlos" s/b "alas dear Charles"
15:24 "and waywardness, and pride,
The heart you lavish"
should be "and waywardness, and pride,
Attract you thus so madly to your mother!
The heart you lavish"
15:46 "fell strings of" s/b "fell stings of"

Regards,
Adrian
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_queenelizabeth_1.mp3 (edit i forgot time, here it is 19:02)
fixed except for the 13:40 because typos probably

by alanmapstone » March 4th, 2024, 1:13 am

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑March 3rd, 2024, 5:49 pm
I have noticed that I sometimes call Carlos by the name Charles. are these typos or not? the first instance is in act one, scene 5 a few pages into that act.
also my favorite typo I have noticed so far is in the stage directions where Dude of Alva is in one of the scenes

Hi Agnes
I think we will all need to use a bit of common sense with this text which full of typos. :(
Please always address Carlos as Carlos whatever the text says. This could be a nightmare to PL :evil:

Hello Agnes,
Noting Alan's instruction, Act 1 is now PL OK!