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GregGiordano wrote: April 11th, 2024, 3:51 pm Here is Act 5 for Don Carlos read for Spot PL -

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_5.mp3

Thank you!

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adrianstephens wrote: April 15th, 2024, 4:22 am
GregGiordano wrote: April 11th, 2024, 3:51 pm Here is Act 5 for Don Carlos read for Spot PL -

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_5.mp3

Thank you!

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Thank you Greg. PL OK!
Many thanks! This was a challenging and fun part!

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Thanks Greg and Adrian :thumbs:
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I am feeling better so here are the corrections for the Marquis (I also did make the optional change).

3: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_marquis_3.mp3
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Inkell wrote: April 15th, 2024, 9:09 am I am feeling better so here are the corrections for the Marquis (I also did make the optional change).
3: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_marquis_3.mp3
Thanks Inkell
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Inkell wrote: April 15th, 2024, 9:09 am I am feeling better so here are the corrections for the Marquis (I also did make the optional change).

3: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_marquis_3.mp3
Glad you are feeling better, Inkell.
PL OK!

Thanks,
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Thanks Inkell and Adrian :thumbs:
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Thank you for the well wishes, here is our first act!

Act 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_1_schiller_128kb.mp3 (1 hour, 8 mins, 31 secs)

I believe it just about scrapes in under the limit :wink:
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Inkell wrote: April 15th, 2024, 10:49 am Thank you for the well wishes, here is our first act!
Act 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_1_schiller_128kb.mp3 (1 hour, 8 mins, 31 secs)
I believe it just about scrapes in under the limit :wink:
Fantastic :thumbs:
Act 1 is Ready for PL!
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alanmapstone wrote: April 15th, 2024, 11:26 am Fantastic :thumbs:
Act 1 is Ready for PL!
Also, Alan, now we know both the word count and have an idea of the cast's speed of talking I'm pretty certain acts 2 and 4 (both longer word count than act 1) will need to be split into two parts while acts 3 and 5 (both shorter word count than act 1) will probably be okay so when you do the stage directions for those acts it'd probably be good if you preemptively adapted them to reflect that (by which I mean including 'this is act 2, part 1' and 'end of act 4, part 2' etc. at the end not just 'end of act 2')
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Inkell wrote: April 15th, 2024, 11:39 am Alan, now we know both the word count and have an idea of the cast's speed of talking I'm pretty certain acts 2 and 4 (both longer word count than act 1) will need to be split into two parts while acts 3 and 5 (both shorter word count than act 1) will probably be okay so when you do the stage directions for those acts it'd probably be good if you preemptively adapted them to reflect that (by which I mean including 'this is act 2, part 1' and 'end of act 4, part 2' etc. at the end not just 'end of act 2')
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I am just starting on the directions for act 2 so I will include the extra intro/outro. I prefer to specify scene numbers for the parts rather than part 1/part2 so I will split the act after either scene 6 or scene 9 at both of which points there is a break in the action and a change of location.
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alanmapstone wrote: April 15th, 2024, 12:14 pm Hi
I am just starting on the directions for act 2 so I will include the extra intro/outro. I prefer to specify scene numbers for the parts rather than part 1/part2 so I will split the act after either scene 6 or scene 9 at both of which points there is a break in the action and a change of location.
Oh right, well if that's how you like to do it then make sure to may attention to the scene lengths so you don't split it at a point where one part is still going to be too long
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adrianstephens wrote: April 4th, 2024, 11:50 pm
jennlea wrote: March 31st, 2024, 4:35 pm Here is Act 2 of Eboli:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_princesseboli_2.mp3
27:29
What a schemer, and very nicely read.

PL notes
2:30 "he knows little" should be "he little knows"
5:14 I think the parsing here is wrong and should be "and more, far more, e'en..."
9:51 "then did prince philip's son" should be "then did phillip's..."
21:46 "called in to revel" s/b "called to revel"

Regards,
Adrian
Thank you for your careful PLing, Adrian. Here are the corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_princesseboli_2.mp3
27:30

The last correction ended up being at 20:48 on my file.
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jennlea wrote: April 15th, 2024, 3:39 pm Thank you for your careful PLing, Adrian. Here are the corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_princesseboli_2.mp3
27:30
The last correction ended up being at 20:48 on my file.
Thanks Jenn
This is Ready for Spot PL!
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Inkell wrote: April 15th, 2024, 10:49 am Thank you for the well wishes, here is our first act!

Act 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_1_schiller_128kb.mp3 (1 hour, 8 mins, 31 secs)

I believe it just about scrapes in under the limit :wink:
Thank you, Inkell. Nicely done.
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34:55 missing stage direction "Queen to princess eboli"
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