alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 11th, 2024, 12:20 am
GregGiordano wrote: ↑March 10th, 2024, 4:26 pm
Here are the lines for Carlos, Act Two -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doncarlos_carlos_2.mp3
This is another large file (45:13).
Alan, since you indicated that you would not be PL-ing larger files for while, I am going to set this particular project aside and work on another play I am also working on. I'll come back to it in a bit to give you time to catch up or find another DPL.
Hi Greg
Thanks for this, it is Ready for PL!
This is going to be a long project so I quite understand that you may wish to prioritise other things.
Cheers!
Thank you, Greg. Nicely read. We have a 2-year-old staying with us, and he is almost as emotional as Don Carlos is!
PL Notes
1:05 "I would not play the bossy meddler's part" should be "...play the busy meddler's part"
(optional) 7:32 "have still disbarred me" s/b "have still debarred me"
(optional) 8:07 I'm not a spanish speaker, but I think "Aranjuez" is pronounced something like "a-ran-hweth"
9:15 "leed be hither" should be "led me hither"
11:57 I think an edit went wrong here, I hear "Your crowd of courtiers and your tribe of sallow monks" instead of "Your crowd of courtiers,
And your long train of cringing, trembling nobles,
Your tribe of sallow monks,"
24:21 "O father <indistinct> indeed" should be "O father ill indeed"
27:01 "and the atonement now must be speedy absence" s/b "... be my speedy ..."
28:57.5 "intimitable" s/b "inimitable"
30:32 "I accept the anger princess" s/b "I accept the wager princess"
33:45 "mocking friends" s/b "mocking fiends"
37:40 "most mighty reasons" s/b "most weighty reasons"
41:00-41:03 missed edit. "a heavenly song ... spot"
42:25 "I will tell thee" s/b "I tell thee"
Regards,
Adrian
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