[FULL] Battle-Pieces by Herman Melville -jo

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » March 31st, 2024, 11:42 pm

AudioCook wrote: ↑March 31st, 2024, 10:33 am Here is section 38 again. I just ended re-recording it since it is relatively short. The timing increased by a few seconds.
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_38_melville_128kb.mp3
1:18

Now PL OK!

Thanks Anthony

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 1st, 2024, 12:01 am

nighthawks wrote: ↑March 16th, 2024, 1:40 pm Here is Section 19. Running the Batteries
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_19_melville_129kb.mp3
06:02

PL OK!

Thanks Alan

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 1st, 2024, 12:25 pm

Section 9 is Ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_09_melville_128kb.mp3
26.47

As this is such a long poem I am prepared to accept STANDARD PL if anyone has the time and patience to listen to it

StaceyM2022 · Post by **StaceyM2022** » April 3rd, 2024, 8:10 am

Hello,

May I claim section 42 again? My voice is back to normal.

Thanks,
Stacey

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 3rd, 2024, 8:15 am

StaceyM2022 wrote: ↑April 3rd, 2024, 8:10 am Hello,
May I claim section 42 again? My voice is back to normal.

OK! section 42 reassigned.

StaceyM2022 · Post by **StaceyM2022** » April 3rd, 2024, 10:39 am

Hello,

Here is section 42. - 58 seconds.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_42_melville_128kb.mp3

Thanks,
Stacey

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 3rd, 2024, 12:03 pm

StaceyM2022 wrote: ↑April 3rd, 2024, 10:39 am Hello,
Here is section 42. - 58 seconds.
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_42_melville_128kb.mp3

Hi Stacey
Thanks for this.
Just 1 PL note:
at 0.05 insert the subheading A Picture by S.R.Gifford, and owned by E.B. Included in the N.A. Exhibition, April, 1865.
otherwise OK!

earl · Post by **earl** » April 4th, 2024, 9:52 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_05_melville_128kb.mp3 (04:05)

earl · Post by **earl** » April 4th, 2024, 10:05 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_06_melville_128kb.mp3 (01:42)

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 4th, 2024, 10:08 am

earl wrote: ↑April 4th, 2024, 10:05 am https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_06_melville_128kb.mp3 (01:42)

Thank you, these are Ready for PL!

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 4th, 2024, 11:57 pm

earl wrote: ↑April 4th, 2024, 9:52 am https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_05_melville_128kb.mp3 (04:05)

Hi earl
PL notes for section 5:
at 0.42 fie on should be pronounced FI-on rather than FEE-on
at 0.53 text is Retreat or fight but I hear Retreat or flight
at 4.00 add This recording is in the Public Domain

Optional: You have pronounced Lyon as LEE-on but it would rhyme better with other lines if it was pronounced LIE-on.
This may be too big a change to make at this stage.

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 5th, 2024, 12:03 am

earl wrote: ↑April 4th, 2024, 10:05 am https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/battlepieces_06_melville_128kb.mp3 (01:42)

PL notes for section 6:
at 0.32 text is While all the porches but I hear How all the porches
at 1.37 add This recording is in the Public Domain
otherwise OK!

volunteer1005nm · Post by **volunteer1005nm** » April 5th, 2024, 2:22 am

Hi, can I please claim sections 22 and 23??

Thanks
Navya

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » April 5th, 2024, 2:48 am

volunteer1005nm wrote: ↑April 5th, 2024, 2:22 am Hi, can I please claim sections 22 and 23??

Sections 22&23 assigned
Thank you

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » April 5th, 2024, 11:21 am

Sections 9 and 54 can be marked PL OK!
Making good progress here.