Hi Stacey
Thanks for this.
Just 1 PL note:
at 0.05 insert the subheading A Picture by S.R.Gifford, and owned by E.B. Included in the N.A. Exhibition, April, 1865.
otherwise OK!
Alan the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
Hi earl
PL notes for section 5:
at 0.42 fie on should be pronounced FI-on rather than FEE-on
at 0.53 text is Retreat or fight but I hear Retreat or flight
at 4.00 add This recording is in the Public Domain
Optional: You have pronounced Lyon as LEE-on but it would rhyme better with other lines if it was pronounced LIE-on.
This may be too big a change to make at this stage.
Alan the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
PL notes for section 6:
at 0.32 text is While all the porches but I hear How all the porches
at 1.37 add This recording is in the Public Domain
otherwise OK!
Alan the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose