28:57Kitty wrote: ↑February 25th, 2024, 6:46 amindeed, reminds me of the old action movies set in India and other exotic places. An intriguing story and very engagingly narrated, I loved it. Thankspyledriver wrote: ↑February 24th, 2024, 4:12 pmThe Pillow of Justice? Sounds like a Mike Lindell-financed superhero movie.
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A few small edits to make still:
> from 0:24 to 0:31: the footnote can be cut, no need to include this, as it's not part of the story
> from 5:06 to 5:07: (p. 3) between "sword out of his hand" and "dagger out of his sash" - considering it's all one sentence, this silence feels a bit long and makes the sentence sound strange grammatically
> at 9:32: (p. 5) "which had so tormented him" - you say "tortured"
> at 14:09: (p. 8) repeat, can be cut "his eyes were shifty and his mouth a little cruel but these expressions are not unusual"
> from 29:04 to 29:06: between "and his beautiful wife" and "end of section 1" - maybe the long silence can also be cut a bit here
Sonia
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