At 0:23, you have a bit of an odd stumble over “A Cat fell in love with…” You might want to fix that.
At 3:07, there’s a word missing: I hear “A Fox, seeing some grapes hanging within an inch of his nose…” But the text reads: “A Fox, seeing some sour grapes hanging within an inch of his nose…” I think this particular fable loses some of its impact if you leave that word out (no good reason why he would be unwilling to eat regular grapes, but understandable that he’d want to avoid sour grapes).
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Winnifred From May 15-23, no access to Checker or to PL readings longer than 10 minutes
Also since it has been a month and I have not heard from ChristineBerry nor do they seem to have done their 1-minute test or even logged since then, I am reopening the section so section 2 is no longer reserved
baxterphil wrote: ↑March 7th, 2024, 2:37 pm
Hi There, please can I claim part 9 ?
I see you have completed your 1-minute test so you certainly can! Since you are new though I will need to add you so I need to know what you would like your catalogue name to be? It can just your forum name or your real name or whatever you want, it's just whatever you intend to credit yourself as when you say 'read by'
Whoops. I take it back. There's one change needed: Most readers are reading all the individual fable titles. You’ve left out the first one, “An Inadequate Fee,” at the start of that fable. Please insert it at 0:21.
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Winnifred From May 15-23, no access to Checker or to PL readings longer than 10 minutes
Whoops. I take it back. There's one change needed: Most readers are reading all the individual fable titles. You’ve left out the first one, “An Inadequate Fee,” at the start of that fable. Please insert it at 0:21.
Thanks,
Yes, good catch, Winnifred, I think readers should be reading the titles