At 0:23, you have a bit of an odd stumble over “A Cat fell in love with…” You might want to fix that.
At 3:07, there’s a word missing: I hear “A Fox, seeing some grapes hanging within an inch of his nose…” But the text reads: “A Fox, seeing some sour grapes hanging within an inch of his nose…” I think this particular fable loses some of its impact if you leave that word out (no good reason why he would be unwilling to eat regular grapes, but understandable that he’d want to avoid sour grapes).
Thanks,
Winnifred
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
Also since it has been a month and I have not heard from ChristineBerry nor do they seem to have done their 1-minute test or even logged since then, I am reopening the section so section 2 is no longer reserved
These are really delightful, and you read them well.
PL OK!
Cheers,
Winnifred
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
baxterphil wrote: ↑March 7th, 2024, 2:37 pm
Hi There, please can I claim part 9 ?
I see you have completed your 1-minute test so you certainly can! Since you are new though I will need to add you so I need to know what you would like your catalogue name to be? It can just your forum name or your real name or whatever you want, it's just whatever you intend to credit yourself as when you say 'read by'
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
Whoops. I take it back. There's one change needed: Most readers are reading all the individual fable titles. You’ve left out the first one, “An Inadequate Fee,” at the start of that fable. Please insert it at 0:21.
Thanks,
Winnifred
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
Whoops. I take it back. There's one change needed: Most readers are reading all the individual fable titles. You’ve left out the first one, “An Inadequate Fee,” at the start of that fable. Please insert it at 0:21.
Thanks,
Yes, good catch, Winnifred, I think readers should be reading the titles
