[COMPLETE] Over the Ocean to Paris, or, Ted Scott's Daring Long Distance Flight -brrot

[mleigh]

Chapter 4

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_04_dixon_128kb.mp3 (11:18)

Another PL OK.

I'm rooting for Eben et al.

M

[KevinS]

Chapter 4

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_04_dixon_128kb.mp3 (11:18)

Another PL OK.

I'm rooting for Eben et al.

M

Me, too! Ted will have to go on his long flight first, I imagine.

[KevinS]

Chapter 5

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_05_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:24)

[KevinS]

Chapter 6

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_06_dixon_128kb.mp3 (13:19)

[KevinS]

Chapter 7

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_07_dixon_128kb.mp3 (11:52)

[mleigh]

Chapter 5

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_05_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:24)

Great job with the chapter. It is PL OK.

M

[KevinS]

Chapter 5

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_05_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:24)

Great job with the chapter. It is PL OK.

M

Thank you!

[mleigh]

Chapter 6

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_06_dixon_128kb.mp3 (13:19)

Chapters 6 and 7 are both PL OK.

Ted's future is starting to look better. Yea.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

M

[KevinS]

Thank you.

This is a series, though I don't know how many books there are all told. Maybe Eben will get his money one day---or even the land and hotel!

[KevinS]

Chapter 8

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_08_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:57)

[KevinS]

Chapter 9

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_09_dixon_128kb.mp3 (11:02)

[KevinS]

Chapter 10

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_10_dixon_128kb.mp3 (11:21)

[mleigh]

Chapter 8

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_08_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:57)

I don't know how I missed these posts until today.

Would you mind so very much going through this file again. I think it got skipped with the editing. Here are my comments for the first approximately 4 1/2 minutes.

0:15 please delete "ted scott head was" as it is corrected at 0:17 Ted Scott’s head was in a whirl"
0:47 please delete "now look here" as it is corrected at 0:49 ‘Now, look here, Ted,’’
1:42 please delete “‘What Mr. Hapworth says is of the most sens’’ as it is corrected at 1:46 “‘What Mr. Hapworth says is of the most sensible, mon ami,’’
2:04 please delete ""Is it not so?’’ “As you like,’’ " as it is corrected at 2:10 ""Is it not so?’’
“As you like,’’ assented Walter Hapworth with a bow. "
2:22 please shorten the silence a little between "feeling the" and "moisture"
3:03 and 3:06 are repeats "The men who gave them that start" and then shorten the pause afterwards
3:33 please delete "There are so many qualifications " as it is corrected at 3:36 "There are so many qualifications required of an aviator "
4:29 please delete "and for the time the subject was d" as it is corrected at 4:32 "and for the time the subject was dropped."

I wouldn't ask except for I am dealing with some significant arm pain at the moment, and while it is easy to listen to files, it is hard for me to note down corrections.

Thanks so much,

M

[KevinS]

Chapter 8

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_08_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:57)

I don't know how I missed these posts until today.

Would you mind so very much going through this file again. I think it got skipped with the editing. Here are my comments for the first approximately 4 1/2 minutes.

0:15 please delete "ted scott head was" as it is corrected at 0:17 Ted Scott’s head was in a whirl"
0:47 please delete "now look here" as it is corrected at 0:49 ‘Now, look here, Ted,’’
1:42 please delete “‘What Mr. Hapworth says is of the most sens’’ as it is corrected at 1:46 “‘What Mr. Hapworth says is of the most sensible, mon ami,’’
2:04 please delete ""Is it not so?’’ “As you like,’’ " as it is corrected at 2:10 ""Is it not so?’’
“As you like,’’ assented Walter Hapworth with a bow. "
2:22 please shorten the silence a little between "feeling the" and "moisture"
3:03 and 3:06 are repeats "The men who gave them that start" and then shorten the pause afterwards
3:33 please delete "There are so many qualifications " as it is corrected at 3:36 "There are so many qualifications required of an aviator "
4:29 please delete "and for the time the subject was d" as it is corrected at 4:32 "and for the time the subject was dropped."

I wouldn't ask except for I am dealing with some significant arm pain at the moment, and while it is easy to listen to files, it is hard for me to note down corrections.

Thanks so much,

M

Oh I'm so sorry. Sorry about uploading the wrong file and also sorry to hear about your arm.

Take care of yourself first, please.

[KevinS]

The correct Chapter 8 is now up in the Magic Window. Again, I'm very sorry for the trouble I put you through with the unedited file. I hope this one is better!

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_08_dixon_128kb.mp3 (10:57)