COMPLETE [WEEKLY POETRY] Mind Dark, by Henry Bellamann - tg

[adrianstephens]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_aps_128kb.mp3 2:07
A powerful poem.

[TriciaG]

Thanks - PL OK!

[pyledriver]

1:22

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_clp_128kb.mp3

[TriciaG]

1:22

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_clp_128kb.mp3

PL OK!

[ahibbard]

Here is my version.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_ah_129kb.mp3 1:55

Cheers,

Anita

[TriciaG]

Thanks!

The file name has 129 rather than 128, but I'll fix that from my end. It's PL OK.

[ElizaCopnall]

Here's my reading:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_ec_128kb.mp3

duration:1.52

[TriciaG]

Thank you! Nicely read.

One comment, which I'm not sure if you want to change or not:

1:06 - "slow, strangling death" - I hear "slow, strangled death". It doesn't change the rhyme or meter and barely changes the meaning, so I'm inclined to leave it alone. But if you want it to be perfect, feel free to change this part.

[ElizaCopnall]

Oof, I can’t believe I did not catch that! I had a couple of goes at fixing it, but it just doesn’t fit in right so I’m gonna leave it as is, if that’s okay
I’m sure there’s an amazing quote somewhere, about not being “perfect”

[Glendav7]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_gv_128kb.mp3

length - 1:41

[fshort]

To Tricia or member of administration.

I’m having trouble logging in:

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I get a message that an email has been sent with password link but I don’t receive anything. I’ve looked in junk mail.

But how am I sending this message if I’m not logged in?

[fshort]

Oh my word. After writing the previous message, I thought I’d try one more time. I was somehow into the uploader.


https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_fs_128kb.mp3

[TriciaG]

Oof, I can’t believe I did not catch that! I had a couple of goes at fixing it, but it just doesn’t fit in right so I’m gonna leave it as is, if that’s okay
I’m sure there’s an amazing quote somewhere, about not being “perfect”

Ha! That works for me. Marked as PL OK.

To Tricia or member of administration.

I’m having trouble logging in:
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But how am I sending this message if I’m not logged in?

I'm glad you got it figured out! Remember that the forum and the workflow (uploader, MW) are two different login systems. So just because you can log into the forum and post doesn't mean you're logged into the workflow. I've deleted your login info and email so that they're not out there for others to see.

Oh, and your poem is PL OK!

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_gv_128kb.mp3

length - 1:41

Got it - PL OK, thank you!

[dckabir]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_dc_128kb.mp3
01:45

Thank you

[TriciaG]

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/minddark_bellamann_dc_128kb.mp3
01:45

Thank you

Thanks! PL OK.

Since we already have a file with DC initials, I'll change yours to dc2.